Reviews for Heaven and Hell
Stewart chapter 85 . 9/4/2016
Thanks for the stories. I wouldn't mind if you finished this arc!
SoulAuron chapter 85 . 11/9/2015
wow dude, this story took 8 YEARS to finish, jusrt this saga alone, that would be like 10 charpters a year? of that is wrong though, there is the hiatus to account for, with that it would be like one charpter a month plus the hiatus (i think it was tow years right?).

anyway enough with that, this was certainly interesting, cant really think of a DBZ story that changes things as througly as yours, its a shame, other people should give this kinda thing a shot.

but do you have plans to post the sequel any time soon? any time late? or do you not yet know when you will be able to post it? give us loyal readers something on that.
guitarlover56784 chapter 85 . 10/10/2015
Wait, what? Wait wait wait... What?! Holy shit. Okay so... we have third level only fused. Vegeta isn't at the limit of the super saiyan levels yet. Only bardock is. Goku is close. Gohan seems to be the strongest, but takes time.. So they all seem very close to the limit of the first and second super saiyan levels. The only thing left to do is to break through. Even then, they don't have the fourth form.. However, that can't be obtained except from the moon.. It should be interesting. Can't wait to see the next story
Son of Whitebeard chapter 85 . 9/6/2015
looking forward to the future
Truth Is What You Make Of It chapter 85 . 9/3/2015
Nice. So I'm going to assume there is a sequel in the works.
aco305 chapter 85 . 9/3/2015
Oh my god! We finally learn who Ravens mate is! Kakarrotto?! I did not expect that, I thought it was going to be Vegetto or maybe the Goku/Bardock fusion. Did not expect it to just be kakarotto. I can't wait to find out his story, how he went bad, and how he became so strong! A good sign about how great this story is, is that even after you finally gave the big reveal it just makes me MORE interested! Keep up the good work
ardee chapter 84 . 8/30/2015
Hey man, are you planning on continuing the Darkness Overcomes You?
Stewart chapter 84 . 8/25/2015
Awesome! I bet the Supreme Kai is concerned that some dragon can repair an entire universe.
guitarlover56784 chapter 84 . 8/25/2015
Finally. We reach the climax. This was most enjoyable to read, I must admit. But I am glad that quietus is finally over. But what were his last words? hmm..
Chris chapter 83 . 8/12/2015
Holy shit that was an amazing couple of chapters. I'm glad Gohan finally figured out how to use all of his powers, it took long enough. The fight with Quietus and Godock was awesome, but I feel like it's only the start of an even better fight. Question was Godock at SSJ1 or 2? I'm excited to finally see raven and the others freed after so long, as much as I want to see what happens in this saga I'm even more excited to see what happens in the next. After building them up for so long I' expecting the pay off to be nothing short of amazing. Keep up the good work. Till next time.
aco305 chapter 82 . 8/5/2015
Wow! This is one of the best chapters you've done. Everything is going down! Raven and her mate finally escaped?! Its finally happening! I'm so excited. Everythings been building up to this chapter, I love how you included Tien (really sad to see him killed though) and, while I haven't been a big fan of Arturo, I think it is really impressive how you've brought this character all the way to where he is, helping the good guys and almost being the deciding factor. But I had a feeling Quietus couldn't be beat so "easily". Also, really happy to see Godock and can't wait to see how badass he is. I noticed that since Raven and all them lost their information feed, and they assumed quietus would be beat by the spirit bomb, they will have no idea about Godock or his power. That could end up being important
aco305 chapter 81 . 7/27/2015
Oh man I loved this chapter! The action was great, a lot of good fights happening. Gohan gaining access to his potential without needing the anger, Hotaru doing her crazy stuff to hurt a Surpreme Mazoku, and the Spiriit Bomb plan is still going safely. All kinds of stuff going on
guitarlover56784 chapter 80 . 7/22/2015
So what the hell happened to goku and bardock? a fusion of them, both being around the supreme kai's level.. and wheres vegeta?
guitarlover56784 chapter 79 . 7/13/2015
And a quote from the joker here... "And here we... go"
Chris chapter 79 . 7/12/2015
I swear this story just keeps getting better and better. I don't know how so many stories have so many reviews when they're not half as good as this one. I'm glad that you have continued this series, it's actually the first fanfic I ever read and it got me hooked. One question will you ever finish hearts of evil.
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