|Reviews for The Furyan's Return|
| jags chapter 30 . 4/17/2013
Beautiful story. As is your other. Please keep writing
| SugarTop chapter 30 . 2/3/2012
This is really a great story :'D i cried more than two times x'D
| SugarTop chapter 16 . 2/2/2012
Great story :'D
| vmg chapter 30 . 8/8/2009
this story was awesome. i read it from start to finish in one sitting. i liked how you had them name the children after the people that meant so much to them. and having Imam's son marry Riddick's daughter, was a nice touch.
i prefer to believe that Riddick did love Jack/Kyra but he can't admit it to himself. (i guess i'm in denial, lol).like in chapter 19 when he admits to Sunara that he thought The Lord Marshal had won and had converted Kyra. That he felt Jack/Kyra had been lost to him. When he yells "Do you wanna know the truth?” “I thought she had given up on me, but she hadn’t. I lost faith in her; she didn’t lose it in me!”
this line got to me because when i saw the movie, i thought to myself, why would you ever believe she's not with you Riddick?
but anyways, your story is one of my favorites. you are so talented. looking forward to reading your other stories. D
| bioncafemme chapter 30 . 4/29/2009
Excellent. Easily favorited. )
| ChildOfFury93 chapter 30 . 4/6/2009
Props, this was a really cool fic.
| AndeRichardson chapter 30 . 12/4/2008
I was bored the other day and often look through the stories to see if there is one of interest. I wasn't really expecting such an engrossing story but I just couldn't stop reading. Even between projects at work I would sneak a couple of chapters in, I'm sure I will hear about at review time but it was totally worth it. Anyways I loved the last chapter you posted it wrapped everything up so well. I really liked the possibility of a continued story following the youngest son's adventures. Anyway I just wanted to share with you how much I enjoyed you work. Thank you for writing.
| CountryGirl07 chapter 29 . 10/7/2008
this is the second time i have read this story and it was just as good now as it was the first time i read it
| Yungthuggin chapter 30 . 10/7/2008
This was the most compelling and moving not to mention best piece of fan fiction I have ever personally read. I write fan fiction myself and I must say that you have inspired me to delve deeper into the inner workings of the characters, allowing them to evolve and grow and become as much a part of my stories as the storyline itself. I urge you to continue writing this story or to write a sequel so I may continue to appreciate the depth of your wrtiing and enjoy the Chronicles of Riddick series all the more. AMAZING WORK!
| Avari20 chapter 30 . 8/24/2008
I stumbled onto your fic by accident, and read the entire thing in one long sitting. I thoroughly enjoyed the story you created. It was well thought out and did a good job of following Riddick as he might have been after CoR. Thank you for writing it!
| SkyHighFan chapter 27 . 5/20/2008
So Vaako's finally dead. It took a lot to kill him but not as much as the Lord Marshal. He had different powers than the Lord Marshal too. His powers gave him enhanced strength and ressurection of the dead while the Lord Marshal had the ability to do some kind of astral form thing which gave him super-speed (what I don't get is that I'm sure his astral form saw Riddick where he was trying to escape to and yet he still pulled his body there to be killed by Riddick), he could take people's souls, he had super-strength and was nearly invincible due to it. Killing him also wouldn't stop his army like it did Vaako's. So Vaako took on different powers when he traveled to UnderVerse? You think he'd want the same powers so he'd be invincible like the Lord Marshal pretty much was. The only reason Riddick defeated the Lord Marshal was due to Kyra's sudden intervention.
| spyke2006 chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
This was an amazing story. I used to write but as of late I can't get more than a few paragraphs on paper. This was impressive though. I'm a big fan of PB and COR and this story should be made into a sequel imo. Anyways, great character development, awesome climax, my only complaint is the rather short finish. Other than that it was pure gold 5 stars and all that crap.
| whiteKnight15 chapter 2 . 4/19/2008
Like it a lot so far.
| blondevor chapter 29 . 2/29/2008
I just read this whole story in one sitting and it's really great! Your own characters are well developed :) Thanks for sharing with us.
Keep it coming!
ps. I'm enjoying your other story Paradise as well and hope you will update that soon
| DixieLullaby chapter 30 . 12/28/2007
To be honest this is one of my favorite Ridick stories. Very well writen you have a nice voice in your writing. I can see you in this writing. There was just enough dialoge and discriptiveness to make the story great. The ideas where new and refreshing. I would like to read more of your stories. All and all it was very well done. the characters were really and very human. GREAT JOB! Loved it.