Reviews for Hot Chocolate
lostxinxtwilightx chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
cutest story ever! oh my so good!
Llama Mama23 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
WONDERFUL!you're an amazing writer!i can't wait to go and read the rest of your things!
utfan23456 chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
aw i love it!
Variety-3 chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
You are quite talented. I love your one-shots. A quick pick me up is what I love to read most of all. Great job!
MidnightxRed chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
lol Bella-sicle

hot chocolate edward?



aww now i want hot chocolate

and a bear hug...

and to go ice skating...

but good story
Kuroi Garyuu chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Aww, so cute!
SWEET-STUFF063 chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
how cute!
Topaz Turtle chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
You are really talented and you get the characters really well!


write more please.

: )
behappyhewhispered chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
Honestly very very funny. I was laughing the whole time. You write very much like Stephenie. Loved it.
Scarlett71177 chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Wow again!

Great job capturing Bella's voice, I really felt like this was *exactly* how she'd react to the 'hike' and being surprised by Edward. You've really nailed her thought process.

This was just gorgeous! The buildup to this lovely fluff (on ice! no less) was spectacular. Thanks for writing and sharing!

cara chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
omg. this was lovely. even better than the prequel. very cute. very funny. i think i found one spelling mistake, if you want to read over it. otherwise well done.
sy300 chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
All the same super duper awesome-ness applies to this fic too. I love your writing. Great job!
BloodsuckingLeech chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
OmGrapes but I can't believe how much I enjoyed this story! I cringed with Bella when I saw the skates, was excited at the thought of Edward gracefully moving across the ice and was so right there when the two were skating in sync with each other. The snowball fight was great, you really have their personalities down. Thanks again...and again to other submissions by you.

"Hot Chocolate Edward"...I Love it !
bleedingblackrosez chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
aw. so cute!

great job! thats so sweet! hot chocolate edward...


Chaeramir chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
very cute!
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