Reviews for The Dance
wheredoigo chapter 9 . 10/19/2007
It ended! Wow! I love the ending!
AprilRainer23 chapter 9 . 10/13/2007
aww that was great. i loved it. and omg i was going crazy without the internet foreal. i got home and unpacked everything really quickly and got on the internet lol but good job with this story. i liked it
Princess Cutie chapter 9 . 10/12/2007
MAKE ANOTHER STORY WITH LOLIVER WITH A LOT OF DRAMA IF YOU CAN! I LOVED THIS ONE! :)
MyCursiveMemory14 chapter 9 . 10/12/2007
aw its over? [
cheyenne123 chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
dang, this ROX! Plus who DOESN'T love loliver?
xx-Morning Glory-xx chapter 8 . 10/7/2007
Yea... this story stinks. Not to be mean, but I can pretty much guess what's gonna happen next. Yawn!
music-guitar chapter 8 . 10/6/2007
great story update!
AprilRainer23 chapter 8 . 10/5/2007
aww it'll be over soon. haha oliver is such a donut lol but good chapter and story update soon and i'll review it next week when i get back from vacation
wheredoigo chapter 8 . 10/5/2007
Aww Lilly was Mae! (Took me some time to get that)
Princess Cutie chapter 8 . 10/5/2007
OMG! I LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
wheredoigo chapter 7 . 9/29/2007
Oh.. please write more!
xx-Morning Glory-xx chapter 7 . 9/29/2007
Ok... No offense, but if it's been 5 years why would then he want to see her? And he would'nt just ask a girl out when he just meet her. If he had a child with him, would'nt that look like he had a wife too? Plus, You can tell Mae is Lilly, try to be less noticable, when you do that.
AprilRainer23 chapter 7 . 9/29/2007
aww man thats not fair haha gosh i hate cliff hangers lol good chapter tho and update soon
Princess Cutie chapter 7 . 9/29/2007
UPDATE ASAP LIKE TODAY! I WONDER WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN! PLEASE LET SOMETHING INTERESTING HAPPEN!
seeyalater chapter 6 . 9/28/2007
PLEASE CONTINUE!

i love it
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