Reviews for Bella wants
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Awesome and what should of happened uh the book
rachelgleek9 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
love it!
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
awesome story
marykennedy chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
yes i thik it means he is hard down there because he is a vampier after all and i loved the story
Trinity Skye McArran chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
~I read ur question and have one for you. What happens when Bella starts her period around Edward?Have fun puzzleing that out!Tehehehehehe!~
BurningTheMidnightOil chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
For the love of god get a beta!

This story is full of errors in spelling, grammar and sentence structure.

For example:

I moaned balling up my hands into fist.

Recognize that?

I didn't know balling your hands up made FIST. I'm pretty sure that it makes TWO fists.

There's many,many more errors I could point out; but that's what proofreading is for.

For everyone's sanity go get a beta. There's a Plethora of Beta Editors available on this web site to anyone needing help.
slimjimjerky chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
"Well hope you enjoyed and that your hormones had fun! YAY HORMONES!"

HAHAH!

mine sure had fun ;)

lol great story!
KoreWillow chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
This was good
josie1901 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
That was good
Culleniscious chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
That was rocking awesome! You deserve the mega ninja award! Go you!
hot 101 chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
LOL I don't know!.Great story, loved it!.
Shante17 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
That was type sweet!
princessyvaine chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
I just love edwardxbella lemons
MinniMuffin chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
My hormones love it!

Great lemon
m r s . a u t h o r chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
WOW. Um...WOW. Well...I so loved that. I'm like so...all fuzzy inside. How romantic...and erotic, yet...romantic.

AWESOME JOB! Keep it up. You're good.

I really like it when authors redo the "almost sex" scenes. My friend and I were reading Stephanie's version of this book and we called it the "Bella Gets Rejected Scene." Now it's more like, "Bella Gets Laid Scene."

Anyway, you're really good. Keep it up.
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