Reviews for Interloper
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
am i the only one who found it funny that in this fic caleb liked ryan?
chasitybsp chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
Loved this one-shot. Very eccentric but hot! Nice job!
nadine chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Hi great one shot, having it set in a funeral parlour was different but it worked brilliantly. Please keep on writing "FAB" fanfics, your writing has really helped my younger sister improve her reading skills. She has Dyslexia and finds reading a struggle , but since shes been reading your fanfics she actually looked forward to doing an hour of reading everyday.

Thanks Nadine
areil2010 chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
You naughty girl!

Reading the description really intrigued me and i was just glad it wasn't in a

I would love to see a sequal.

Great One-shot. chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Hee, excellent !

It was really funny, and I was quite surprised that Marissa was the first to make a move, I thought Ryan was the funeral crasher.

Really great, love your stuff lol!
patto85 chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
what can i say. i loved it so much. the way you write ryrissa is amazing. this is such an interesting one shot. no matter where they are their chemistry is undeniable. so hot. can't wait for more from you. ryan and marissa always!

xxocluvurxx chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
Haha. That was awesome cracked me up. It's awesome that he turned out to be a funeral "crasher" too. Great idea it was hallarious.