|Reviews for Final Challenge|
| Paul McKinnon chapter 42 . 5/27
I'm... surprised. Not happy Ash had to die but... yeah. I'm probably not going to read this again... for fear of going into depression. It happens sometimes when there's a character death. Yeah...
| DodgingKing chapter 42 . 5/22
Another one of the first stories I got into from Fanfiction. I remembered the best parts of the story - that it was taken place into the future, with what seemed to be a championship battle instead turned into disaster. And that the story had Advanceshipping - one Pokemon shipping that, while I am not loyal to anymore, still have some fondness for it.
I loved the main plot, the subplots for the most part in the story, and the ending which was perfect. The one thing that really disturbed me (even as an Advanceshipper) was how Drew was depicted in the story (at least, his backstory leading up to this story). It felt a little...out of place. I didn't mind it back then, though.
Regardless, I liked this story a lot. Though I felt that this story should've come after the 'prequel' was written (let alone started)...when Matkin22 started that project after this one I felt that particular project might fall through due to lack of interest. But yeah, even if it's been ages since I read this...have to give credit where credit is due. Good story for Advanceshippers.
| gage chapter 42 . 5/3
i just want to say you are trulyan amazing writer. i hope i can more pokemon stories like this in the future
| Lover of Pokemon chapter 41 . 2/21
Great story! I liked it until close to the end of chapter 41. Even then, I waited, only to be disappointed by chapter 42. Tbh, there were a few different ways of resolving the plot, and I do not think you took one of the correct ones. In my opinion, a better ending would have been one in which Ash and Arceus survived. (Yes that would have been cliche, but sometimes it should be, and I think this is one of those times.) this story was epic, and as such it should have that type of ending. Instead, you redirected it elsewhere, and it simply does not fit. Overall, great story. I'll be saving this on my computer with my edited ending if that's ok with you (I won't publish it, so you don't need to worry about plagiarism.)
| Bulbreon chapter 42 . 2/14
That was the most beautiful ending I have ever read *Wipes tear from cheek* This was so beautiful
| Bulbreon chapter 21 . 2/14
Oh snap. That just happend
| Bulbreon chapter 19 . 2/14
I knew it was Richie right after you mentioned the Tyranitar like 3 chapters ago.
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/23/2014
| MostAdvanced chapter 41 . 6/19/2014
Also try a dark ash advanceshipping story it's just and idea I had so thanks for the story and yeah bye
| MostAdvanced chapter 42 . 6/19/2014
Beautifully crafted 1 of the best advanceshipping stories on here it will most likely my 2nd favorite it is wonderful just keep making more stories like this and you'll be one of the best authors on here
| ashxmay chapter 32 . 5/28/2014
The reason this story lost views and reviews is because of the lack of advanceshippyness and it became really boring
| Ashmn chapter 42 . 4/23/2014
I can't hold all these feels
| pokemon blood chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Dam! It looks like this story is off 2 a good start! I'm loving it! I guess I'll read it sumaray looks good so gg!
| cody chapter 42 . 1/15/2014
Ive never cried after finishing a book but I did just now after I finished this one. Thank you for writing this great and beautiful story.
| Daanh chapter 42 . 1/11/2014
Really enjoyed this story, it was perfect, too bad what happened at the end to may and ash, but it makes the ending more special, thank you for the story.