*Tear*, I'm going to cry now.

That was seriously one of the best storys i have read.

Write more storys!

Mabey a sequal?

*wink wink nudge nudge*

P.s. I wonder how the sequel will turn out. I hope you IDK, Raise Ash from the dead. - hint hint-

~U Rock!Advanceshippingrox.

Well. It's done. Sorry it took me so long to reveiw. Every time I tried to reveiw, I wound up crying.

Everyone here seems to agree with me in saying that your story can't compare to May's Crush. While his did seem to have more shippyness, yours had a ballnce of genres that are so long, I couldn't go into them. You have left us all in awe at your superb story.

I'm am truly sorry I couldn't have been with you since the beginning, but I found this website, IDK, 6 months ago. But I will tell you this. That 1st crappy reveiw I'm ashamed of, was my very first reveiw here on FanFiction. Most people say they got hooked on Advanceshipping because of May's Crush, not me. It was YOUR story that made me become an Advanceshipper, so in a strange way, I'm in your debt.

I have a few ideas for Advanceshipping stories, so if I ever post them, I'd be honored if you reveiwed. Thans for a great story that can't be compared to another.

~ U Rock! Advanceshippingrox.

God damit. Why did you have to make such an incredible ending? I really wish I could've been with this fiction from the very beginning, but I was only able to read it when Chapter 31 came out. And I've got to say, that was the ending of one of the best Fanfictions I've ever read.

Granted, of course there were several things that you did in fact rush, and things that you could've in fact emphasized, but it all worked out in the end beautifully.

I'm just a little ticked that you had to kill everyone off at the end (I don't know, maybe you wanted some comic relief,) but seriously, I would've thought that Latias may have known that Ash became the final Ho-oh (considering the Legendary connection factors.) But in any case, it worked out all right in the end.

The end, the end, the end. I absolutely hate that phrase. It really ticks me off to have to finally make that last chapter or that last sentence, or that last word. But, it's finished. It's done. The End. Gone.

But still in the record books as one of the best Advanceshipping fics to date! Absolutely phenomenal work! And you, sir, were also one of the authors who inspired me to write my own fiction: The Aura is With Me. Never stop that ever flowing stream of ideas, because one of those had to make this story, and another one will make the next.

From reader to author,

What a Kick ass job you've done.

-lunarshadow69

i think that chapter was great i can not wait till the next have awsome ideas.

ps send me message back plz

{Applauds, while wiping away tears}

Bravo man. It's sad to see this epic fic end, and with such a sad ending at that, but I commend you for staying the course, and daring to end it like that.

Sorry I haven't reviewed much as of late, I kinda lost my zest for it, but I figured this deserved some words.

Anyways, congrats on finally finishing this awesome story. I look forward to any and all future fics you write.

Dave

That...that was friggin intense. Amazing job. This should be the last Pokemon movie, seriously. Whenever they end the series this is how they should do it. Just...woah.

I agree with Amphlosion and LuciferIX. This is cannot be compared to May's Crush or Dark Gems. Hell, it can't even be compared with Trials of the Elite Four or Trails 2: War of Legends! I am as sad to see this story's end as I was to see the end of the Harry Potter series.

You should seriously think about writing novels of your own. I'm sure they could easily be better than Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, Artemis Fowl, and Pendragon combined. I think you are probably the best author in the whole of

Keep up the excellent work!

PS: You're definitely going on the top of my top five favorite authors list.

. .Wow. Words are truly unworthy to describe this story... I really hated Drew in this story, loved the part when he tried to apologize lol. From Ash being a frontier brain to the epic coclusion with the GS ball. The story was incredible, Lucifer is right this story deserves a class of its own. Sad how Ash died, the ending really had me, I almost started to cry, and great words of wisdom from the Author of what could be the greatest Poke Story Ever...

Peace.

As LuciferIX said, your story can't be compared to May's Crush or Dark Gems. It's a different type of genre, and your story is my favorite by far in that genre. For me, the mark of a really good story is my desire to continue reading it while disregarding how late it is or how long I've read it. When I first started reading it, that's what happened. I couldn't stop until I got to the most recent update, and then I awaited every update afterwards. In fact, in the same way May's Crush and Dark Gems inspired you, your story first inspired me nearly ten months ago with the idea that I am now making into a story.

When I first read Giovanni's chant for Cyas, I knew someone was going to have to die. But even when I saw that Ash was the first to realize this, I kept thinking in the back of my mind that something would happen that would make it so he didn't have to die. But in a way, he didn't truly die like his father didn't truly die, and I like the way you made that parallel.

The only somewhat negative thing I can think of is that it didn't feel like there was complete closure with Drew. Although that might be something to happen or be referenced in your sequel, should you have the time to do one in the near future.

Thanks for the read, it was a truly great experience.

*(applauds* BRILLIANT! ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! There aren't many great writers like you out there. I hope to read more from you!

The Epilogue finished the story quite nicely, although it was somewhat sad as well, but nowhere near as sad as the end of the previous chapter. I would like to thank you for writing this story, as in the time that I have been reviewing, I've been enjoying reading this story. It's sad that this story is finished, but, anyways...this story will be one of the few that I will never forget.

I...I can't even begin to make a review for this chapter. The end...the ending of it...god, I'm actually about to cry...

This chapter, is one of the best chapters that I have ever seen written out of all of the stories that I have read, including the completed ones.

Wow... like... wow...

Just... excelent...

Speechless...

Sentences... unformable...

wow...

You... you... killed Ash...

I... I... *Is crying*

Oh my god... the wtory was great... but... Ash, dead?

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