| Reviews for Final Challenge |
|---|
   Daanh chapter 42 . 1/11/2014 Really enjoyed this story, it was perfect, too bad what happened at the end to may and ash, but it makes the ending more special, thank you for the story. |
| Mayfan chapter 42 . 12/7/2013 It's the best fic i'v ever read i almost cried when i read thd last 2 chapter's |
| Guest chapter 42 . 11/27/2013 can you make a squeal? |
| DraconianPhilosopher chapter 42 . 8/27/2013 Beautiful, nothing more to say. Forever Reading, -Darkrai6543 |
| Markman chapter 42 . 8/19/2013 That ending felt... different. It was just so... out of place in comparison to the rest of the story. I don't even know how to explain it; it was well-written and happy-go-lucky to me, seemed like all would go well in the end, like they simply couldn't lose. So... for that to happen in the last chapter? I don't even know if I could say the words. All that comes to mind is, "Wow...". Anyway, great job man! |
| pyroguardian-of-thewhiteflame chapter 42 . 8/17/2013 All I can say is this was a great fic and I hope you continue making better and better fics. |
| Blazetile chapter 42 . 8/2/2013 I may be 5 years late to say this, but this may be the most inspirational advanceshipping story after "Mays crush" by PikamasterADV :) I REALLY REALLY LOVED IT! :D Hope you can do one last one-shot advanceshipping story... |
| Astropye chapter 42 . 7/15/2013 This is the best story I have ever read and will be no matter what. |
| ThirteenMoney chapter 42 . 7/15/2013 I'm in tears over the ending of this story. Your story is the only one so far that has made me cry at then end. You should be proud of this story. It is one of the best stories that i've ever read. Keep up the awesome work, and congratulations on making a grown man cry. |
| Pikapixie The Demigod chapter 42 . 7/7/2013 ...this was the most complex story i have ever read on fanfiction, ever. I was going through my faverits list, and saw it, and thought, what the heck? I cried. Again. I read it one more time. I cried AGAIN. Its just.. you know so much about pokemon. You really tied everything together, with no loose ends, and everything worked, it fiy with the facts, and you nailed most of their personalities. That is what ash would have done (not to mention i love it when they make paul a bad guy) and..it was an original, twisting plot with surprises at every turn. You nail emotions, too. Your a great writer, you know. Much better than me. Sorry for sending such a long reveiw, but it was very necessary to do so. |
| Pikapixie The Demigod chapter 8 . 7/6/2013 Ummm...did he fall asleep on the ground? |
| RegisFulguris chapter 42 . 6/9/2013 This was an amazing story. It had its ups and its Downs, but overall it was still amazing |
| ZShaq chapter 42 . 5/9/2013 AGH! IT'S SO GOOD! WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END LIKE THAT?! Amazing story! |
| Pikapixie The Demigod chapter 41 . 5/5/2013 That...was...freaking..AMAZING! Its soso sad but gorgeously written. And it seems like something ash would do. I wonder if you could possibly get this animated...or maybeyou know a good artist that good draw it into a manga? |
| Pikapixie The Demigod chapter 28 . 5/4/2013 His eyes are brown |