| Reviews for Final Challenge |
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   zeaeevee chapter 1 . 9/7/2007 WOW! O_O this was like... totally AWESOME for the first chapter im expecting a really interesting story. ASHxMAY 4EVER UPDATE SOON! ~nya~ (_) |
| aipomlee chapter 1 . 9/7/2007 COOL! looks like it will be a great chapter! |
| HandleWithKerr chapter 1 . 9/7/2007 To author... can't remember your name, lol. Anyways am here to both applaude and critique the story so far... 1. Love the idea, really great stuff. (AshxMay rules) 2. Whenever you write a story from the start it's best to write maybe 3 chapters in before publishing it... but hey, am not writing this am I? 3. Like how you've included Dawn, she cool. But she's a little like a girly May clone... not quite... Ah! Brain hurts! . 4. Please for the love of Mew, Pikachu is female! NO! 5. Make the chapters longer... like if you have an idea for chapter 2, write it into chapter one as if you haven't changed chapters and it will increase the story's overall length. 6. Come read my story "Dark Angel". Also has Ash and May pairing but there's loads of other characters around the place and May and Ash come in quite a bit laters... wa-ha! 7. Bye! |
| Wolfofdoom chapter 1 . 9/6/2007 Dude this is awesome. Please update soon. |