Reviews for The Lost Daughter of Potter
Silvus chapter 3 . 3/14/2014
Not even 3 chapters and end! What a silly story. Logic? Not a spark. Credibility? Still less. A good basic idea, the execution however totally fail. The author can not even decide whether the name of the child is now Ada or Ava...
A pity.
Arabella Lily Potter chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
Great story so far, but is the little girl's name 'Ada' or 'Ava' because it changes constantly in your story. I don't like either because they make up the firstpart of the Killing Cuse, because the is AVAda Kedavra, and avADA Kedavra
WolfAngel75 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
I like this story and think it's awesome. I will keep reading it and loving it's awesomeness ;D
pwrmom2 chapter 14 . 2/1/2011
Excellent story!
l'amour perdu chapter 14 . 12/22/2010
Wow... that is just... WOAH! a truly evil ginny like that... not at all what I expected.

there were some errors in writing, but it was still a well done story.

I hope you keep writing.
bookworm2009 chapter 14 . 10/18/2008
loved it!
Mionefan chapter 14 . 5/11/2008
Whew! What a ride. OK, I didn't figure this one out until the end. Good story. A little rough in places, but hey, I couldn't have done nearly as well on this type of story. Congratulations... but 8 kids? Poor Hermione!
DarkEros07 chapter 14 . 2/10/2008
aw how sweet. i loved it. sad in parts...but hey i loved it. i knew ginny was behind it! lol. people hate me when i read something i already know whats happend before it does. takes all the fun outta it for them! lol. anyways great story!

Sevish chapter 14 . 9/18/2007
If I only read the epilogue I would think this was Harry Potter and the multiplying bunnies. Jeez, lol.
Sevish chapter 13 . 9/18/2007
Ha you worked "vapid" into the story. LOL. All in all I hadn't guessed it was Ginny. Pretty good.
gu61 chapter 14 . 9/15/2007
Thank you kindly for the epilogue. I am glad to see everyone happy, including that harry and hermione allowed to be around their daughter. It showed bravery on both parts to leave their daughter, but you made up for it by allowing them in her life. Good work
gu61 chapter 13 . 9/15/2007
I just found this story and I would like to have a definative conclusion and find out what happened to to Harry, Hermione and Ava, and what happens to Ginny. I think you have great potential, but please I really hate it when authors leave a vauge ending. Keep writing what you enjoy and have fun
RANGER99 chapter 13 . 9/15/2007
This was such an excellent plot with a story line that kept me guessing every few chapters, woundefully done i hope you write that epiloge one day...
KungFOoBlaher chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
i know this is suppose to be a h/hr fic but the way you wrote it, it makes me wanna see d/hr happen
Sevish chapter 11 . 9/14/2007
If Azureguy "cringes everytime he reads it" how is it that he has apparently read all 11 chapters. Obviously he's getting some enjoyment from it or he wouldn't be reading. Also he himself has not written any stories to have critiqued. He seems quite willing to dish it out, but has nothing availible so that he could be looked at with a critical eye. Keep going, that's why this website exsists. To give aspiring writers a chance to hone their skills without the threat of penalty.
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