I LOVE THIS! UPDATE SOON!

Interesting idea... I found the other chef's granddaughter VERY amusing, she fits him just muy perfecto, but the thought of her granddad copulating was... a bit awkward... but anyway, really cute OCs you have here! I like the way this story is going and how it all turned out after the movie ended. Keep up the awesome work here!

Annabelle4.0

emiele is remeys older broher, he has called remey little brother in the movie.

This is a good story, Please dont abandon it! Please Update it Soon!

I can't log onto my account right now but my pen name is Sarawh. Pleeease continue this! Every little detail you've put in has just made this so believable, and I love it. You've stayed true to the characters, especially the part where Colette says she doesn't want anymore kids. I can totally see her saying that, she never quite struck as the motherly type! What you've got here is great and would totally be a shame if you didn't continue.. aaah!

Finish this. Finish this now. Seriously though, just found this fic and have really enjoyed it so far - look forward to future chapters!

This is good. You show the events of the movie but in your own different way. Poor Alfredo!

The past 8 chapters of this story have been fantastic; I'm surprised the story hasn't gained more popularity. (As I mentioned in my PM) this is well-written and doesn't have and particular glaring spelling/grammar mistakes, as far as I can see.

I love it when I find OCs that I don't hate, as they often feel like their shoved in the story, intruding. However, this isn't true with Elania, as she is a dahl, likeable and is necessarily needed. This is what I personally think a good OC should comprise of; You seem to have achieved the perfect combination (XD).

I wish you luck for writing the rest of this multi-chapter! So far, it's great.

Christina

this chapter was written/posted on my bday

HOLY SMOKES AN UPDATE! I remember reading this years ago and all of a sudden there was a new chapter! And it's just as good, if not better.

Skinner had a kid! Who in their right mind would want to copulate with him? I think this is angery good story so far . Keep updating please! :)

Yup. I'm hooked. I always love how you're able to add so much depth to the personalities of some of Disney's most two dimensional characters!

Keep on writing! (don't forget about this story- it's fantastic)

ooh that's good! :D

Aw, Linguini and Colette's baby! She's so cute! Excellent work! :)

Aw, poor Linguini! I felt so bad for him when he lost his mother! :( Great job! You characterized him and his family and friends really well! :)