Reviews for The Pureblood Coup
Elise chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
This story has given me the creeps. I've never heard of such a sick story like this one. I think I'm going to have some serious nightmares.
Relala chapter 17 . 7/16/2008
This is a VERY good story! I love it! In fact, I AM CRAZY FOR IT! But I hope you take these to heart: Get spell check and stop using everyone's last names when you've already intoduced them.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 57 . 5/15/2008
"He was tired of playing with that toy." This line makes me sad. Poor Bella...

The story as a whole was very disturbing, but I can't deny that I was suitably entertained. Althought the sex/rape scenes made me cringe a little.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 56 . 5/13/2008
OK, it says "Could I die? Could I kill himself?" I think you meant "myself" not "himself" there...

I can't believe it's down the the final chapter! Can't wait to see how you finish this!
Lamia of the Dark chapter 55 . 5/1/2008
Ooh, what's Bella doing there?

you need to proofread! you've got "past" where it should say "passed" and I know I noticed some otehr typos...

but anyways. Once again I'll say it: Poor Narcissa. Lucius is such a jerk!

can't wait for the next update!
Lamia of the Dark chapter 54 . 4/29/2008
Poor Narcissa... Lucius is such a jerk...
Lamia of the Dark chapter 53 . 4/29/2008
THE SNAKE POOPED!

please tell me it is not going to be like that when he is with Bella.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 52 . 4/29/2008
I'm sorry, I know you didn't mean it to be funny, but LOL "Sit on his face"
Lamia of the Dark chapter 51 . 4/29/2008
Oh noes. This is so gross. Wait, did you say you think he had sex with the snake?
Lamia of the Dark chapter 50 . 4/29/2008
Could you explain in more detail how exactly the nipple clamps look/are worn? Because I'm confused about that.

poor Narcissa...
Lamia of the Dark chapter 49 . 4/26/2008
OH NOES Lucius is passed out on the bed, what's Voldemort going to do when he finds him there?
Lamia of the Dark chapter 48 . 4/26/2008
Greyback is freaking disgusting. I still laugh everytime I see the words "pimp cane". lol.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 47 . 4/26/2008
You do NOT need to keep reminding us that Rodolphus is Bellatrix's husband every time you mention his name. It is unnecessary and rather annoying.

What the hell is "vanilla sex"?
Lamia of the Dark chapter 46 . 4/26/2008
They did a dance!
Lamia of the Dark chapter 45 . 4/26/2008
Nice Latin.
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