|Reviews for Visit from the Future|
| angelwings chapter 29 . 7/2/2010
OMG I LOOVVE this story it is AMAZING! u right so peprfectly so i never get confused even though its a confusing situation, or so ud think but the way u write it so perfectly is...amazing! just PLEASE tell me max and fang end up together cause i already hate this "danny" guy and think hes a jerk for not being fang! haah but u r amazing, this is like the best story i have read yet on fanfiction! PLEASE keep updating, and please make it as fast as possible so i dont have to deal with withdrawals from this story! bhahaa thnk u for writing this brillant piece of work!
| bluehyperpixie chapter 29 . 7/2/2010
I'm so pathetic that I didn't even realise that there were new Maximum Ride books out after The final warning. But I have A levels, that's my excuse. Anyway the minute you mentioned I ran and bought max... the faxness in it actually mented my heart!
Going to buy fang the next minute I'm not broke! SO THANK YOU!
Anyways, I loved the chapter, especially that Max3 didnlt give in so easily and the whole smoothie attack, it's so common so I was glad that it happened to Max for once.
I just wanted to mention that there were a few typos like fact and forgetting the capital in Max so you might want to wtach out, I think that there may have been others but I don't remember.
Anyways love you, sorry for the babbling long up review. xx
| ranlou chapter 29 . 7/2/2010
:DDDDD so cute! You have no idea of what reading this chapter while listing to "I'll Pray For You" feels like. Cause "I'll Pray For You" is a song that's like "I pray a flower pot falls on your head" lol. I can just imagine Max in this song... especialy after "FANG". :DDDD
| FantasyAddict97-10 chapter 29 . 7/2/2010
Great chapter! I kept expecting Max to fling a knife or something at Fang. Haha. ) Update soon!
| Jasper'sHarryFang chapter 29 . 7/2/2010
i feel like i waitedd years for this even though i didnt and ooo sooo good but u left lykk 2 cliffies in one chapter lls how is that possible idk but u did it update soonn :)
| xxXBookHolicXxx chapter 29 . 7/1/2010
If you don't update soon i'm going to...
just kidding but still update soon :P
great story by the way. I want to know how everything ends up and one more thing Fang is looking like Edward and it's creepy. Watching her sleep and leaving her for he own "good". Please don't I hate Edward and I love Fang I don't thing I can handle any resemblance between them. Besides that definitely one of the best stories I've read.
| timelord99 chapter 29 . 7/1/2010
All I can say is Wow. It's really good and I can't wait until the next chapter is ready!
| Winged.Armed.Dangerous chapter 28 . 7/1/2010
i loved it! cant wait for more!
| The Awesomealator chapter 29 . 7/1/2010
Somehow please make Max 2 find out about Fangs plan! and its good! update soon!
| flocklover19 chapter 29 . 7/1/2010
pshtt what the heck is the point of him trying to fix things when the future is going to change when stupid past fang is going to mess up the future by changing the past and not getting with max ! ughhh my head hurts to much future stuff hahahah but anyways i loved the fax with both versions please continue soon!
| flocklover19 chapter 28 . 7/1/2010
AHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS STORY IS DRIVING ME CRAZY I LITERALLY SCREAMED AT MY CP! AND RAN AROUND MY ROOM UNTIL MY WALKED IN LOOKED AT ME THE CP AND SHOOK HER HEAD AND LEFT hhahahahaha that what your amazing writing does to me !
| I say RAWR XD chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
this is great i loves it
| MissA540 chapter 29 . 7/1/2010
How can I say this... If there is not FAX in the end as the ending pairings and if Fang still is being an EDWARD about the whole thing, (EDWARD is code for masochistic controlling male), then I think I will steal your watermelon.
Lexi. Is. Sleep. Deprived. And. Eating. Sugar.
| bluehyperpixie chapter 28 . 6/24/2010
she went after him...!
and then boom...!
How could you end it at that!
Update sooon, I'm begging you here
| ChameleonRide22 chapter 28 . 6/15/2010
Plllllllzzzzzz update soon! :)