|Reviews for Love luhv, noun|
| Makingstuffup chapter 3 . 4/9/2008
gosh this is weird...
I was looking at your profile, thinking about skimming Tango Lessons and I saw- this. Que? so I think its cool that you're doing Potter, especially since its not Hermione/Draco love. Anyways:
Things I like about this story:
-its about Sirius and Remus
-the formatting. I like how each chapter is for a specific definition, but it still flows as a plot, not a series of vignettes.
-characterization of Remus
Things I don't like:
-the pacing. I can't tell if you're writing characterization drabble or a story. I'm always one for endless musings, but I think this story could do with a stronger plot. You've started down the path of the "we like eachother, but don't know it yet- just wait till we find out!" plot, but rather than a progressive story, its just a few selected scenes. Right now, its a movie trailer, but I want to see the feature film!
-omniscient perspective. Is it Remus POV or Sirius POV? First chapter I thought: "oh cool-its a Sirius explores his sexuality fic" but then that plot line was seemingly dropped as you switched to Remus POV which is equally interesting, though disjointed.
You claimed you weren't sure what year it should be. I vote end of third/ beginning of fourth. Why? puberty. Also wouldn't it be sickeningly sweet if Siri became Padfoot because he wuvved his Remus? Disgustingly adorable.
lol- the world is turning upside down. you writing Harry Potter fiction and me suggesting fluff.
This review is ridiculously long. Whatever.
Luhv ya. xD
| Unsimply-Maddie chapter 3 . 11/27/2007
Oh Please, oh Please, oh Please update soon!
I love this story already.
And I can't wait for another chapter.
You're an awesome writer.
Just so you know.
| nicmirusaki2 chapter 3 . 11/17/2007
loved it continue please!
| Tomorrows Dust chapter 3 . 11/11/2007
Update...? pretty pretty please?/?. Going through withdrawal is a serious thing (pun intended) I really liked the story, very believable and nicely written. I wanna hear more!
| OpalTears chapter 3 . 11/7/2007
Ha! Really funny and cute :) Love it!
| LMckay chapter 3 . 11/5/2007
Im a lovesck schoolgirl for this story!
Im so loving it! And pouting Sirius? my fave!
Not short, lovely, tho Id like to read about Siris perspective :D
Dont make us wait too long!
| random-minions-go-forth chapter 3 . 11/5/2007
coolio that rocked please write more
| May Eve chapter 3 . 11/4/2007
I just luv this whole story! I can't wait for more! I hope you continue this!
| Crystal Haze chapter 3 . 11/2/2007
*giggles* This was cute! Trust Sirius to keep saying 'love'. You have to continue.
| Faramirlover chapter 3 . 11/2/2007
Aw. Poor Remmy. I love him so much. Please make them get together soon. Update soon?
| Elves of the Moon chapter 3 . 11/2/2007
YAY! I ,ehem, love the chapter...
I hope Remus isn't all turning mad because I seem to be loving something digital o-0'
But I really do!
Thanks to Remus I now think twice whenever I use-pronounce the L-word again X-x
see you next time,
| truest-of-true-loves chapter 3 . 11/1/2007
turned from a hormone riddled teenager to a lovesick schoolgirl.
that line made me smile. this was a cute chapter, i really liked it actaully. i like that it was about the defining ofwords and what they mean literally and what they mean to a person. this was good. very cute!
| LadySyren chapter 3 . 11/1/2007
i really like this story. it almost makes me wish i believed in love...i know how moony feels...
| ThePenaltyBox chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
That's all I can describe it as.
| Crystal Haze chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
I pushed the periwinkle button ... Lol.
This was way too cute- it's so like Sirius to be making a blanket with the house-elves for Moony - just aw aw aw! ) Loved it - continue please!