|Reviews for Morning Star|
| 1853kaz chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
Make that third time! I just checked the reviews.. You should have more than this. Criminal! :)
| 1853kaz chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Hi! Just wanted to say I returned for an encore reading.. Still a great story. I was a little uncomfortable with Bella's feelings for Jacob, without the imprinting on embryos to explain it away (how silly does that sound?!) But you know what, I was with canon, too. In that respect and in every other measure I think you were incredibly faithful to the original. Thank you for the pleasure.. Second time around! Cheers.
| KerriJoeWhitlock chapter 18 . 4/30/2012
that story was amazing.
I loved every minute :)
I couldn't stop reading!
You should do a sequel!
| 1853kaz chapter 18 . 1/19/2012
I did enjoy it! Thank you! I'd actually bookmarked it ages ago, and when someone mentioned it on ADF, I paid a "return" visit, only to find it was actually my "first" read. Love a good diversion from canon. Cheers :)
| 1853kaz chapter 13 . 1/19/2012
Their fake death scheme was well thought out. Thanks for replying! I'm sorry I'm not leaving more reviews.. It's pretty late, time for bed, my brain has stopped working and your story deserves eager attention! See you tomorrow.. :)
| 1853kaz chapter 10 . 1/19/2012
You make use of some lovely imagery. The moonlight pond, even the morning star story. Really enjoying it. Feels "true".. :)
| 1853kaz chapter 9 . 1/19/2012
Just like canon Bella, her actions just seem to hurt him, don't they? Glad he finally let her see how it affected him. I don't think she means to be hurtful.. but all the same.. I guess she's really acting like the teenager she is. :)
| 1853kaz chapter 8 . 1/18/2012
Your Edward is every girl's dream vampire! Very reassuring and loving. Slightly more optimistic than canon.. especially when it comes to babies.. which makes a nice change. :)
| radar1230 chapter 18 . 11/12/2011
There were so many parallels to BD in this story, I found it almost uncanny. I love how you found a way to give Bella and Edward an HEA without sacrificing the plot. Now that was a fantastic ending!
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with all of us.
P.S. I'm still finding it hard to believe that you wrote this story 4 years ago. :)
| radar1230 chapter 15 . 11/12/2011
So many difficult choices for Bella. At least the babies are safe, for now.
| radar1230 chapter 12 . 11/12/2011
My heart breaks for Bella and the thought of her saying goodbye to Renee and Charlie.
| radar1230 chapter 10 . 11/9/2011
RL is busy, busy, busy, but I had to get a few chapters in. I'm still shocked how well you have captured canon. It almost boggles my mind. Are you sure you're not SM? lol
Great story. :)
| radar1230 chapter 8 . 11/8/2011
I had this story rec'd to me by Capricorn75. I love a good AU and I've always loved Breaking Dawn. I keep looking at the posting date...almost having a hard time believing this was written before BD. Your writing has such a similar feel to SM's.
I'm going to continue reading.
Love this story. :)
| BookishQua chapter 5 . 10/8/2011
GinnyW rec'd your story. For the record, I loathed BD. I love what you are doing. Bella's reaction here at least to me seems so much more like the character. You've done a great job showing the conflict between her and Edward. Can't wait to see what you do next.
| glo4twilight chapter 18 . 3/26/2011
well thank you so much for that wonderful end to MS! i loved so many things about your story especially the fact surrounding bellas pregnancy and their babies and the fact that they'd had twins! so perfect and vampire daddyward was so frickin hot n sexy and just yummylicious! please continue your wonderful gift of writing to keep it sharpened and ever progressing! congratulations also on your committment in completing this story! i mean who knows...you've left so many things in this story that could warrant a sequel so you may be inspired somewhere along the way to do exactly that!