|Reviews for Morning Star|
| alwaysgone chapter 16 . 11/2/2007
Great chpter. Alot of decisions and emotions. Heart breaking leaving your kids behind. update soon I love it!
| MeyaRose chapter 16 . 11/2/2007
That is so sad!
| eclipselover chapter 16 . 11/2/2007
WHAT? What is Edward going to say? What is Bella thinking? She's nursing these babies! What is Jacob going to do? Please update ASAP!
| sounds of music chapter 16 . 11/2/2007
WHAT? OMG - NO! This chapter nearly broke my heart, first still finding out that Alice is still distancing herself, and then Bella going to see Jacob. Then not only does she see him, but she GIVES AWAY HER CHILDREN? WHAT? She just killed Edward's heart, he's going to absolutly when he finds out, and I don't blame him, I'm pissed at Bella. WHY? WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?
| Leria chapter 16 . 11/2/2007
Ah this is going to break Edward's heart. I don't think she should have done that without talking to him first, at least he should get to hug them bye. But alas I have never really understood Bella too well. Can't wait until the next chapter :)
| Bribbie chapter 16 . 11/2/2007
Depressing... very depressing... and depressing the whole chapter was depressing. Meany!
edward will not understand. I know that. I don't know why Bella doesn't. He's stubburn. And those are his babies, living with Werewolves, he could barly stand letting Bella visit with them, there's no way he'd be able to handel his children living with them, he's gonna freak. He's gonna go balistic, he's... it's not gonna be pretty. On top of being enraged that Bella would leave them there, especially without talking to him, terrified that something's gonna happen to them, guilty because he will aknowledge the reason bella did this, and totally depressed missing them. No pretty, I'm NOT looking forward to that, it'll be scary. Temper to rival a wolf's i wouldn't be suprised if he shook like one or if he burst into fur! *sigh* no that is not gonna be good
What happened to a climax fallowed by falling action leading to a HAPPY ENDING! HAPPY! Can't they have a little happiness. I mean i know Edward was Happy when he was with the babies, but there hasn't been that happy time where they could just be happy. Edward and Bella haven't had any edward Bella time together, i mean this just isn't a good situation at all.
and come on! Jake, "they could have been yours" what was that? that was cruel! very very cruel. I'm so glad Edward wasn't there to hear that. It would have been as painful for him to hear as it undoubtadly was for Jacob. And i mean come on what is this? With her and Jake, i mean? He needs to get over her and get an imprint, and she HAS EDWARD CULLEN! Her TRUE LOVE, HER SOUL MATE! she may love Jake but it;s nothing compared to her love for Edward and like when he finds his imprint... here Shunka said it best..."That's what Jake always said but I chose this life. Not because I was afraid of losing Jacob to his imprint but because I truly love Edward. I know, even though he is as stubborn as ever, Jacob realizes that now...that he has you. You see I did love him but when you meet your soul mate, it's just a whole different feeling...love doesn't seem to do it justice"
This is from "The Woods" a fic about Jake and his imprint, and Bella was telling this to Jolene, said Imprint. Si yeah, this BETTER GET BETTER SOON! i know the "confrontaion" with Edward that's coming up is going to be very unpleasant, but after that Please promise me something a little happier, some fluff would be awesome right now! This story is definatly fluff starved right now, work on in please! lol
You knoiw i love you now on to read something funny to alleviate the depression
| xedwardxloverx chapter 16 . 11/2/2007
aww. this chapter is so sad '[ major props for everything, especially for having the pack involved, and the way it's written, like, the kindness they show, it makes me not hate the wolves, which is basically what i feel toward them almost 100% of the time lol. anyway, you've managed to do it again, to write a masterpiece, even if it is the same story. please continue, because i look foward to reading your story every time you update.
...And thats when my heart broke...
| eclipselover chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
| tudor-rose445 chapter 15 . 10/28/2007
This is good so far. :)
| runs with vampires13 chapter 15 . 10/27/2007
This story is amazing I can not to read more.
| astarael013 chapter 15 . 10/27/2007
o good chapter. How are they gonna get out of this one? haha. update soon, hope you get those 200 reviews, you deserve it.
| bubbles907 chapter 6 . 10/26/2007
Amazing. I seriously never even guessed that she was pregnant. I had absolutely no idea. Most stories in which Bella gets a baby are so obvious but you've done this so well I was actually frustrated that I had no idea what was wrong with Bella (before you revealed the pregnancy).
| AKPeachesx1227 chapter 15 . 10/25/2007
i am in love with your story, its really good! :):)
| Stravaganza93 chapter 15 . 10/25/2007
I really liked this chapter The whole twist with
Amir was really good. Im happy Jane is gone, but sad that Edward still won't change Bella. Please keep writing!
| ReaderRabid chapter 15 . 10/25/2007
a fabulous chapter! it touched on so many emotions, and felt so real!
I love Rosalie's twist of feeling superior to humans rather than jealous at the end, that also feels so real.
I understand Edward's reasoning for splitting up the family, and I think it's sound. I just wish it could be different!
looking forward to the next update!