Reviews for Morning Star
EmmiLuvsEdwardCullen chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
That was good, every chapter of it )

" Masen conveniently chose that time to whack Edward in the face with a rattle. "

Adorable! great job! I hope to be reading more of your stories soon!

Emmi~
EmmiLuvsEdwardCullen chapter 17 . 11/28/2007
I love that last line! And it has been such a sweet story, I'm glad everything worked out. I love happy endings! Fabulous job, your story has been amazing!
tudor-rose445 chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
Very nice.
Bribbie chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
You're already on my alert list...

Ah, well I have a thing about knowing EVERYTHING and since there are many open ends I am a little dissapointed, I also didn't get much of my Family fun i had been anticipating, With the Aunts and Uncles, and Grandparents...

Why are they being strangers? They could be cousins or Edward can just be thought of as the older one, already moved out and Married with kids but wants to stay near his family. Cause Grandpa Carlisle deserves his recognition, as so the Aunties and Uncles. *sigh* Oh well...

Like i said, you seemed in a hurry to just get it over with. So it really wasn't your best, but I none the less liked it. Though i actually feel bad for Alec.

Lanky Blonde? Green-eyed? I was all excited till you got to the tough girl in leather with tattoos... lol... though i actually want a tattoo, but not something big or intricate, like a little aquarious sign on my hip. lol... But i have to wait till I'm of age... there are laws and my mother won't give me permission, so...

I'm actually trying my hand at writing. It's a jacob story, because nothing I'm not very original when it comes to Bedward. lol. But then agian, I'm not original with Jake either, I'm putting in characters loosly based on myself and my best friend for Jake and Embry, because I'm not cool enough to make up my own characters. I'm taking Creative Writing next year though, so maybe I'll learn. lol.

Well Much Love, Congrats on the completion, BEdward forever (give ME jacob)

bridget
Bribbie chapter 17 . 11/28/2007
Well... um... after ALL THAT that's it? Just bam, they're not coming after all.

Well my dear, It seemed as though you were itred of the story and just wanted to end it. I guess that's understandable. Life get's in the way and you just wanted it to be done so it wasn't left hanging, right?

Well at least it's all good... I gotta read the next chapter...

Much love, Bedward forever (give ME Jacob)

Bridget
sounds of music chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
I'm so sad that it's over. But it was the perfect ending. I loved this story so much, and I got so excited every time I got an email saying that you had updated. Great job on a story well done. I'm looking foward to the story about Alice and the other one about Rosalie, post them soon!
dark fairy79 chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
i loved this whole story! cant wait for the next one
koerle chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
This really was a wonderful story!

I hope to get an alert soon ;)
koerle chapter 17 . 11/28/2007
Oh, what a beautiful ending. I had no idea how you were going to get a happy ending out of this one... but you've done it.

This story was really wonderful!
Cue the Starlight chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
I love warm and fuzzy endings! :)
eclipselover chapter 18 . 11/28/2007
Great story! one of my favorites!
dianag99217 chapter 17 . 11/28/2007
Loved it...
eclipselover chapter 17 . 11/28/2007
You wrapped it up nicely. Great story
dark fairy79 chapter 17 . 11/28/2007
im so glad it all worked out! yay for happy ending
CloverofReason chapter 14 . 11/22/2007
I really enjoy reading this fanfic. Most people just rush through the story but you made everything worth reading. Keep on writing!
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