|Reviews for Morning Star|
| prettypinkbookworm chapter 13 . 10/10/2007
yay! so excited you updated (though it was worth the wait)! I really liked this chapter, it was so good. one itsy bitsy thing,I think you have a typo here.
he shook of his pensive mood
Sorry if my reply made you rush, but other than that it was really good! I don't really know what else to say, except that I'm dying for the next chapter (of course).
| Moira Bianchi chapter 13 . 10/10/2007
Goin' runnin' to read Edwards!
Good Edward now!
| ReaderRabid chapter 13 . 10/10/2007
wow - amazing chapter! you did a great job twisting emotions, I feel like I'm wrung out!
My heart is aching for Charlie & Renee. The idea of Mike Newton on the TV turned it into a laugh, though. I was so worried for Bella - what if she had gone into labor earlier, alone? I just sounded *wrong* for them to leave her by herself on a mountain.
I look forward to the one-shot, and to seeing where the story goes next! I am looking forward to meeting the babies! :)
| koerle chapter 13 . 10/10/2007
What a great chapter! I just love this story.
And to end with a last line like that... I just want to know what will happen next!
| dark fairy79 chapter 13 . 10/10/2007
this was such a great chapter , i loved it
| alwaysgone chapter 13 . 10/10/2007
OMG! Your writing is wonderful. I don't think I have any nails left. lol. What a cliff hanger. I really think you sould be writing your own story if your not. I would absolutely by you books. Please continue!
| dramagirl5231 chapter 13 . 10/10/2007
Wow such a good, detailed story! I liked the little jokes that were added in the story to keep it light hearted. Poor Bella, she really is a danger magnet. Keep writing!
| sounds of music chapter 13 . 10/9/2007
OMG! This chapter was amazing! I panicked when Bella started having contractions, especially the second time, when she was all alone! I was about ready to kill Edward. for not calling, and then I hear it was all Bella's fault, my goodness! I can't believe the Volturi are coming - this is so so so NOT good! Please post again soon!
| YinDragonVampire chapter 13 . 10/9/2007
update right this second!
i mean now!
| eclipselover chapter 13 . 10/9/2007
wow, this was a really great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens with the Volturi. Update soon please, I love this story!
| Daintress chapter 12 . 10/9/2007
This has been an interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how they will talk their way out of the trouble with the Volturi, and learning what exactly is so unusual about the children. Also, the fake car accident interests me immensely. I'm glad they took the time to plan around the forensics team. Lol! Overall, very entertaining. I've had a good time reading it, so I'm going to leave it on my favorites list in hopes of an update.
| Moira Bianchi chapter 12 . 10/8/2007
Hey... good stuff here...
Are u still updating?
Really catchy! Usually I dont care for pregnant Bella stories, but yours got to me...
And Edward is.. mean... I dont know... more criptic then ever...
Well, what happens now?
Are u still on it?
Hope u are...
| Loco987 chapter 12 . 10/4/2007
( i meant chapter nine in my last review sorry) great chapter but the end was so sad... i cant wait to see what happenes update soon!
| Loco987 chapter 10 . 10/3/2007
chapter 10 has definetly been my favorite! i havent caught up to the latest update yet but i love your story... the morning star was so cute and a little bit sad at the same time. That part of the chapter reminded me a lot of "I Won't Spend Another Night Alone' By The Ataris... you should listen to it and see if you havent heard it. I think it really realtes to the chapter! You a fabulous writer.. great detail and plot... I cant wait to read more!
| nikkinik211 chapter 12 . 10/3/2007
OMG OMG OMG I'm own the edge of my seat with anticipation! This is so amazing so far and I absolutly love it! The next chapter will probably make me cry, but it is so worth it. Keep on writing!