Reviews for Morning Star
radar1230 chapter 8 . 11/8/2011
I had this story rec'd to me by Capricorn75. I love a good AU and I've always loved Breaking Dawn. I keep looking at the posting date...almost having a hard time believing this was written before BD. Your writing has such a similar feel to SM's.

I'm going to continue reading.

Love this story. :)
BookishQua chapter 5 . 10/8/2011
GinnyW rec'd your story. For the record, I loathed BD. I love what you are doing. Bella's reaction here at least to me seems so much more like the character. You've done a great job showing the conflict between her and Edward. Can't wait to see what you do next.
glo4twilight chapter 18 . 3/26/2011
well thank you so much for that wonderful end to MS! i loved so many things about your story especially the fact surrounding bellas pregnancy and their babies and the fact that they'd had twins! so perfect and vampire daddyward was so frickin hot n sexy and just yummylicious! please continue your wonderful gift of writing to keep it sharpened and ever progressing! congratulations also on your committment in completing this story! i mean who knows...you've left so many things in this story that could warrant a sequel so you may be inspired somewhere along the way to do exactly that!
glo4twilight chapter 17 . 3/26/2011
omgomgomgomgomgomg! yayyyyyy! omg! i am crying my frickin eyes out here! first they were extremely brokenhearted and sad tears as bella had to leave the babies! and then it was relieved tears cos emily was so wonderful and understanding and accommodating and willing to look after the babies and then it was anxious tears when the cullens got to her and then happy tears when esme understood and all the cullens finally realised and understood as well and then more tears with wondering how edward would react and then finally happy and relieved tears when alice had her vision and it was finally safe and they could go and get the babies! omg my heart just ached for those little babies not being with their mom and daddy! what a wonderful chapter...all the knots in my stomach have left and even tho i was frustrated in the last chapter i was really hoping you'd have something up your sleeve but blow me down if i could figure what it was to get the cullens out of trouble! but there you go it was awesome thank you so very much for that!*huge sigh of relief*
glo4twilight chapter 16 . 3/26/2011
omfg that is fucking jacked up! wtf is she doing? edward is gonna be frantic and manic! jeez they're his kids too! omg my heart is failing...lol...i am so pissed at her...how is that gonna help i mean taking them away is just stupid right? omg i guess i just have to read on...i do hope this story has a HEA! i didn't see any of that coming at all!
glo4twilight chapter 15 . 3/26/2011
omg are the cullens ever gonna be free of the volturi. i mean they just keep to themselves and live peacefully and don't even indulge in human blood so why aren't they just left alone! anyways i'm glad there was a twist and the cullens survived...but why in the world won't edward change bella and they should all stay together. the children will need grandparents now tnat they can only have one set of them. excellent chapter and so very well written!
glo4twilight chapter 14 . 3/26/2011
omg i hope those frickin volturi get theirs! i can't stand them and if i ever am suddenly blessed with such a talent as to write a ff myself i will write one where the volturi get their asses kicked by the cullens!lol! actually i think that i have read maybe ONE ff where that did happen and i was as pleased as ever!lol! right now i am so saddened cos of what they did to alice and cos they've come to steal the babies and cos bella gave birth without the rest of the cullens being able to be there. but at least edward and carlisle were there and bella did so well. and the babies just sound gorgeous and their mom and daddy sound so rapt with their arrival! but now to deal with the frickin volturi dickheads!lol.
glo4twilight chapter 13 . 3/26/2011
wow that was a good long chapter and so full of stuff! i have to say that i was all nervous and anxious first to see if the accident setup worked and then that they'd left bella up in the mountain by herself although i knew that had to happen in order for everything to be convincing. and the fact that she was on the verge of going into labour and not having a car or nothing there for her! reeealllly scarey! and then to find out that if they'd fought with the werewolves and got killed or badly injured that she'd be stuck there all alone! omfg thank God they got back there to her!btw i don't doubt that the cullens would've kicked those frickin werewolves asses!lol
glo4twilight chapter 12 . 3/26/2011
oooohhh i am so saddened. frickin volturi ruining all their beautiful plans! mongrels! it was so wonderful to see renee finally be so taken by the babies and charlie also! soooo frickin cute and yet they're never gonna get to see them..i hate that their deaths have to be staged. one of the parts i liked in breaking dawn was that charlie got to see his granddaughter! and of course that bella got to see charlie a little after she was changed. anyways i feel so sorry that bella is grieving but she says that it's her choice and she obviously hasn't changed her mind so she clearly loves edward very unconditionally! excellent chapter!
glo4twilight chapter 11 . 3/25/2011
well the only reason i like the idea of the fact that tanya went to the volturi is that i can't wait to see her limbs torn from her and that she be well and truly burned!lol! i really like that part. but i am however sorry for the fact that bella won't get to see her parents again and that they'll never see the babies. i am also sorry that her parents are probably gonna end up hating edward forever...lol..but i guess he would think it's a small price to pay to keep her and his babies alive! but really wtf is gonna happen? very suspense-filled. as for jacob i hope he gets killed by a vampire that's unknown to any of them...hahaha! oh well that was only my thought!
glo4twilight chapter 10 . 3/24/2011
omfg that was such a painstaking chapter!*wipes sweat off brow* lol! i was so saddened that edward hadn't taken her home yet! but i do understand bella needs to realise some home truths about herself and to pull her fucking finger out and communicate with her husband...yes...her HUSBAND..he's not her bf anymore!geez why is she pissing me off so much? i hate angst..and i'm so glad he's taking her home! and she needs to forget about that frickin jake! overall...brilliant writing! the skating thing was just so gorgeous! and edward is just so wonderful when he compliments her! and i love the way he always puts his hand on her tummy...nawwwwww so precious! oh yeah edward bringing the meat for the children was really funny and so cute!
glo4twilight chapter 9 . 3/24/2011
wow that was rather heartbreaking..but yes why did she wanna go and see jacob! he's a frickin jerk and so immature..he's always expected things of her due to his own self conceitedness! but she's such a sucker! i'm glad that even tho edward loves her terribly and he knows she loves him ...that he's given her an ultimatum! and i really would like to know what jacob was thinking! btw there is no disappointment in this story...your writing is just amazing! btw i would really like to know what the frickin deal is with tanya and her obsession of edward it seems! now bella needs to frickin snap out of herself! geez!
glo4twilight chapter 8 . 3/24/2011
omg how frickin awesome! it's so wonderful that their babies are normal looking and have blood pumping through their veins. lol i can't wait to see what characteristics you will have for these babies! as for her going to la push...hmm not such a good idea huh? and leah...what a callous bitch! and that rosalie...omfg she's frickin creepy! poor bella she has to contend with a vampire sister in law that wants to harm her cos she pregnant and a mother that won't talk to her and a frickin werewolf friend that she can't talk to..but thank God she has the rest of the cullens by her side and especially edward and now her fears have been put to rest..she doesn't have ugly monsters growing in her belly!lol! wonderful chapter!
glo4twilight chapter 7 . 3/24/2011
well that certainly was not a reaction you'd like to have from your mom huh? so i understand why bella didn't want to stick around and just wanted to get back to edward. it's a good thing that edward is a mindreader and was able to talk to charlie after being in his head. i do kinda feel sorry for charlie and i really don't like renee at all. the least she could've done was talk to her daughter. what a wonderful husband edward is...to be the ogre in order for his wife to still have her relationship with her father. very well written chapter.
glo4twilight chapter 6 . 3/24/2011
oh i forgot to mention that i am so rapt that they're having twins...very exciting...and i am wondering with great anticipation to see how you're gonna have them turn out or how the pregnancy is gonna go! you have definitely made this very interesting reading that's for sure. i was a little somewhat shocked at her response to carlisle i would've thought she'd understand why he had to say that to her. also she reacted pretty badly when originally told that she was pregnant! so i really do hope she is remorseful and apologizes to carlisle regardless of what esme said. otherwise i just loved this chapter.
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