|Reviews for Morning Star|
| hotandcold chapter 12 . 7/4/2009
First, I am so awful that I've read all 12 chapters and I am only now reviewing. But, I found this story so long after you wrote it...
Anyhow, this chapter brought tears to my eyes. Heart breaking and bittersweet.
Did you really write this before BD came out?
| WhereWouldIBe chapter 18 . 6/18/2009
This is an amazing story. I cried in many parts and felt my heartache for many of the characters - and I LOVE it. wow. I love when I can feel the characters emotions and I couldnt wait to finish.
Glad Jacob got his happy ending and Im guessing - imprinted.
| tatie87 chapter 18 . 5/7/2009
I just found this gem of a story and fell in love. This is one of the most beautifully written Twilight stories I have ever read. I loved the potrayel of Bella/Edward relationship and the Cullen's.
| TheFuent chapter 12 . 4/13/2009
I think that was the best Twilight related chapter I have ever read. Books by Myer included. So heartfelt. So wonderful.
| barefootandlost chapter 18 . 4/4/2009
Fantastic! I loved it!
| hedoesnthavefangs chapter 18 . 3/17/2009
I think I may have found my alternate breaking dawn. Before I start, I didnt hate BD or anything, this story just incluided everything I was looking forward to reading about after finishing Eclipse, so I'm pretty stoked. Just a quick list of the main plot points I enjoyed in this story (sorry if i cant help comparing it to BD):
- May sound weird but bitchy Tanya: Bella gets to have Jacob fight over her, so I think Edward deserved someone as well.
- The wedding night; not that i have any aversions to a good lemon, but this was so sweet and didnt go into too much detail which i thought was appropriate to the tone of the story, but also didnt fade to black, thank god
- the fact that Edward actually liked Bella being pregnant was so refreshing! And after the babies were born I could still relate to Bella
- I really liked it that Edward stood up to Bella regarding Jacob!
So thank you for this story, you're an amazing writer! Cheers.
| procrastinatingagain chapter 12 . 3/11/2009
This chapter was so real; it brought me to tears a few times. I think I will replace Breaking Dawn with this ending in my mind. (What I have read so far anyway.)
Are you sure you are not SM? There are so many similarities it's kind of eerie. From what I can see you wrote this before BD came out so the similarities are rather intriguing. If you are nor SM then I would be easily convinced that she read this FF.
| HeswamtoFrance chapter 18 . 3/8/2009
This was a fantastic story. I am so glad to have read it. Wonderful writing.
| Another Abandoned Account chapter 11 . 3/6/2009
Somehow I feel a good cry coming on. I love Charlie so much. He was so good to Bella. This is going to be some tough stuff... but still very necessary for the story. Thanks for writing.
| Another Abandoned Account chapter 10 . 3/6/2009
I'm really glad you're addressing how awkward it would be for a newly married couple to live in a house where everyone could hear EVERYTHING. No wonder Edward was hesitant to talk about anything there. I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks for writing.
| Another Abandoned Account chapter 9 . 3/6/2009
I'm really enjoying this confrontational Edward. In the books he pretty much let Bella do whatever she wanted. I like that this Jacob thing is finally being nipped in the bud! Thanks for writing.
| Another Abandoned Account chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
I heard that this was the REAL 4th book on the Lazy Yet Discerning Ficster.
| dessilicious chapter 5 . 3/3/2009
Most doctors don't take blood samples from a finger. It's mostly from the vein in your arm. Otherwise great chapter!
| mariejannette chapter 6 . 2/27/2009
I love that Edward gave Bella his baby rattle. So sweet.
| kellyam chapter 18 . 2/26/2009
What a wonderful story! I got the recomendation for this story at the Lazy, Yet Discerning Ficster. It was everything that Breaking Dawn should have been. You are a fantastic writer and I am excited to read your other stories.