Reviews for A World Unending
samusbot chapter 10 . 3/28/2013
You are definitely a Firefly fan.
Charles McCoy chapter 15 . 12/10/2008
Well, i figured that since ive gotten to this point, i mind as well give you my feelings on your novelization...

(turns to cupil) Drum roll please!

*cupil turns into a drum and rolls across the web page*

Thank you. And now, for this authors opinion...


I have now read up to the end of this book. Time to move onto Book five, Amnethyst Lightning.

Hmm, I believe Ill borrow the Monocroes and cruise over to the next one... uh.. hi ramirez.. how ya doin?

Ramirez: Where there is light, there is darkness..


Greki chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
Lol, I just realized that I still owed you the ones from this book. Hmm, sorry but for now I'll save this one. xD I love your writing, but not enough time to re-read so many other chaps! See ya!
Dancing Spirit of Sol chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Khazim was great in this chapter!
Darth Elecian chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Erotic, thats how I describe your Vyse & Fina lemon. It was good, could've been a bit more descriptive, maybe a bit mores substance but you did good. I'd give it 3 out of 5 stars.

Anywho, I'm surprised that you are not including the Lands of Ice in this book but then again it has gotten a bit too long. But I will look forward to Amethyst Lightning. In the meantime, keep up the good work.
majinbuu7985 chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Man that was a great chapter, (ducks a wind blade), and I agree with Aika's Fianlly coment. When Cupil joined in (side steps a tiny hail of bullets), I thought he would do some weirder things, but it turned out kind of cute (although a little gross), and am looking forward to the next book , the threesome scene and an extra lemon in the epilougue, if not more, (kcocks away a iron fist), and also PLEASE CONTROL THESE PLUSHIES OF YOURS, first the female ones won't stp glomping me, and now the male ones are trying to kill me, HELP!
Aki Iokua chapter 15 . 1/17/2008






I'm sorry, the writer who was going to post this review has died from a massive bleeding from the nose. Please forgive the interruption.

_ Cupil really should take a bath. I liked your idea.
Traiden chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Got to keep an eye out for a Lawrence/Pastol soon. Though I don't much care for lemons, you do write the romance leading up to it well... */* Can't wait till the next Book! •
Arcon1 chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Well done as usual. I'm looking foward to the next book. Keep up the good work. Thanks.
skygunner58203 chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Wow...the end of the book. I am both shocked its here...and amazed it turned out so well. I am looking forward to amethyst lightning. Sorry can't talk much right now, but i'm off to work. Laters
Luthorne chapter 15 . 1/16/2008
Aww. Very cute. Looking forward to the next in the'll be interesting to see what else you'll do with the storyline. And, of course...threesome! I kinda want to go back and play it again.
Desert Lynx chapter 15 . 1/16/2008
(No, I didn't read the final chapter)

I just wanted to say well done on completing another book. Can't wait to see the next one!
Skyraptor66 chapter 14 . 1/2/2008
Lemon? Yes. I've been waiting for one.

(*Waves a blu flag*)

And yes, that's really all I reviewed for. Sorry.
Darth Elecian chapter 14 . 1/1/2008
Ah, a bit of R&R for the crew and now they have Don! I'm also glad you didn't make him "the drunk helmsman" like the game did. Seriously, I don't think it would be smart to let a non-sober man to pilot a ship, let alone an airship. hahaha

I look forward too seeing what you do with the next upcoming chapters. Lands of Ice, yay! bdw, I got ur joke because I do know what the lolcatz are and I'd say go ahead with the Vyse&Fina lemon.
Aki Iokua chapter 14 . 12/31/2007
Do you really think you need to ask me? Yes.

And yay, that was fast. Happy New Year. _
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