|Reviews for A World Unending|
| samusbot chapter 10 . 3/28/2013
You are definitely a Firefly fan.
| Charles McCoy chapter 15 . 12/10/2008
Well, i figured that since ive gotten to this point, i mind as well give you my feelings on your novelization...
(turns to cupil) Drum roll please!
*cupil turns into a drum and rolls across the web page*
Thank you. And now, for this authors opinion...
I LOVE IT!
I have now read up to the end of this book. Time to move onto Book five, Amnethyst Lightning.
Hmm, I believe Ill borrow the Monocroes and cruise over to the next one... uh.. hi ramirez.. how ya doin?
Ramirez: Where there is light, there is darkness..
| Greki chapter 4 . 9/11/2008
Lol, I just realized that I still owed you the ones from this book. Hmm, sorry but for now I'll save this one. xD I love your writing, but not enough time to re-read so many other chaps! See ya!
| Dancing Spirit of Sol chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
Khazim was great in this chapter!
| Darth Elecian chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Erotic, thats how I describe your Vyse & Fina lemon. It was good, could've been a bit more descriptive, maybe a bit mores substance but you did good. I'd give it 3 out of 5 stars.
Anywho, I'm surprised that you are not including the Lands of Ice in this book but then again it has gotten a bit too long. But I will look forward to Amethyst Lightning. In the meantime, keep up the good work.
| majinbuu7985 chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Man that was a great chapter, (ducks a wind blade), and I agree with Aika's Fianlly coment. When Cupil joined in (side steps a tiny hail of bullets), I thought he would do some weirder things, but it turned out kind of cute (although a little gross), and am looking forward to the next book , the threesome scene and an extra lemon in the epilougue, if not more, (kcocks away a iron fist), and also PLEASE CONTROL THESE PLUSHIES OF YOURS, first the female ones won't stp glomping me, and now the male ones are trying to kill me, HELP!
| Aki Iokua chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
I'm sorry, the writer who was going to post this review has died from a massive bleeding from the nose. Please forgive the interruption.
_ Cupil really should take a bath. I liked your idea.
| Traiden chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Got to keep an eye out for a Lawrence/Pastol soon. Though I don't much care for lemons, you do write the romance leading up to it well... */* Can't wait till the next Book! •
| Arcon1 chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Well done as usual. I'm looking foward to the next book. Keep up the good work. Thanks.
| skygunner58203 chapter 15 . 1/17/2008
Wow...the end of the book. I am both shocked its here...and amazed it turned out so well. I am looking forward to amethyst lightning. Sorry can't talk much right now, but i'm off to work. Laters
| Luthorne chapter 15 . 1/16/2008
Aww. Very cute. Looking forward to the next in the series...it'll be interesting to see what else you'll do with the storyline. And, of course...threesome! Hmm...now I kinda want to go back and play it again.
| Desert Lynx chapter 15 . 1/16/2008
(No, I didn't read the final chapter)
I just wanted to say well done on completing another book. Can't wait to see the next one!
| Skyraptor66 chapter 14 . 1/2/2008
Lemon? Yes. I've been waiting for one.
(*Waves a blu flag*)
And yes, that's really all I reviewed for. Sorry.
| Darth Elecian chapter 14 . 1/1/2008
Ah, a bit of R&R for the crew and now they have Don! I'm also glad you didn't make him "the drunk helmsman" like the game did. Seriously, I don't think it would be smart to let a non-sober man to pilot a ship, let alone an airship. hahaha
I look forward too seeing what you do with the next upcoming chapters. Lands of Ice, yay! bdw, I got ur joke because I do know what the lolcatz are and I'd say go ahead with the Vyse&Fina lemon.
| Aki Iokua chapter 14 . 12/31/2007
Do you really think you need to ask me? Yes.
And yay, that was fast. Happy New Year. _