Kakashi-Kurenai are hilarious! And thanks for not dragging Naruto's selective stupidity for longer.

Hinata saying "I have nothing better to do…" was... wow. That's one of the worse reasons to go out on a date.

Why do writers keep writing Naruto as selectively stupid?! It's frustrating as hell! I mean why the heck is he surprised that Hinata was worried sick about him?! But then he's aware that Haku was hitting on him, tells her that he kinda has a girlfriend but then turns frustratingly clueless when dealing with Hinata?! Ugh.

Intriguing concept but wouldn't Hinata still need eyes to actually 'see'?

And why the heck is 'this' Naruto trying to paint Hokage mountain?! That too leaving blind Hinata standing alone?! Illogical and preposterous for 'this' Naruto to behave this way!

Kurenai will never let the anybody talk such shit about her team in front of her. She will immediately put them in their place with serious warning.

The writing style is incredibly childish and uninteresting. Stopping it here.

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . . .

pretty good story.

dang, you killed Hanabi...

I really like how you weave a story.

Cool story. One question though, why didn't they traspant her mothers eye's when she died?

I love that the kids are both told about their betrothed but told they can’t tell said betrothed and to earn their love. I wish more arranged marriages are like that. It’s a way better arrangement and romantic.

I thought you said you fixed this? You've never once spelled "than" correctly. You've never once spelled "there" correctly either. Wow. You are a braindead dumbass, aren't you?

great story I enjoyed it from start to finish

It’s been 10 years, and I just read this fan fiction. I don’t know if you’ll see this, but I wanted to say that this is the bes fan fiction I have ever read. Well written, good plot, and a compelling storyline.

That was great fucking story. Thank you.