Good prelim chapter for the big fights to come. I continue to enjoy the NaruHina relationship and the whole team 8 that you have here. I was glad to read in the A/N that you will not do Anko much more in the story...she isn't one of my favorites.

Another chapter full of interesting twists and good action.

Still a great story...the date was low-key but good for a first one...sweet! I like the chapter as a whole...the date preparation and leadup. All good.

In reference to your a/N where you mentioned not doing a 'harem' here...I want to say 'thank you'. In other stories where there are more than on person for Naruto or even Hinata I quit reading...the romance goes instantly out of the story and it becomes pervy only. NaruHina is just for Naruto and Hinata...in my opinion. I loved the chapter...this was a great one. The ending was soooo cool when Naruto was forced to step in and say he was going out with Hinata. I loved it.

Cool chapter again...Haku shows up and Hinata gets put in a tailspin by his comments about the other girl. I like your take on this part of the arc...it is different enough to be new and interesting. I wonder when Naruto will open his eyes a little here?

I love the chapter...with the twists you put in with team 8 here it was very new and fun to read. I'm glad you are keeping Hinata and Naruto close and with no big problems and misunderstandings coming between them. Great entertaining story.

Gosh, this was a great chapter that was long enough to include a lot of interesting events. It is soooo cool that Hinata is able to see now using the jutsu and the special headband...there is just so much cool stuff here. Hinata's crush on Naruto is sweet, as usual, this is what makes NaruHina romance so unique...Hinata only has eyes for Naruto and he will want only her.

I love the big-time twists in the story that are here now that the story has reached this point. Very fun and exciting the way Hinata works with Naruto and you have worked in a close relationship ...but more than brother/sister. You are including some great jutsu ideas too.

Why didn't Hinati just transplant her eyes to Hinata when she passed away?

Gosh, this was a good chapter. The jutsu Naruto made to help Hinata see through his eyes is very creative...great thinking with that one. I can see what is going to happen next so Naruto can become a genin...love the story so far.

Superb story...another good setup for what took place toward the end. Wow!...this was kind of tough to read...for a NaruHina guy...they actually took her eyes?

I loved the prologue...this looks like a great one! I like your writing style and the content looks like it is going to lead to a wonderful story.

but... shark meat is toxic the only safe part to eat should be the liver because of all the ammonia it creates, plus the high mercury content

I finally found this fanfic again!

This is a beautiful masterpiece. I couldn't stop myself from crying a bit in the end. Thank you for writing this stellar piece of literature!