U had me tearin cuz I loved this story soooooo much I didn't want it to end!

Excellent! Usually I see fics that break from canon and don't do very well but it was suspenseful and I couldn't predict what would happen next at certain parts.

With out a doubt one Theodore the greatest fanfics I've ever read thank you

I am Extremely impressed with this. First time I've read a fluffy story that was both realistically gory and able to tear me is something many best selling novelists were not able to do. even with the grammatical problems I could still understand what you where trying to say. Good Job.

Beautifully done, I cried at the end. I throughly enjoyed this. Congrats on a job well done and a awesomely completed story of 38 chapters with no authors note to stand in as one.

All good untill the epilogue it made it feel like a 80's movie coming to an end

When in 2008 my grandma would get the manga at her job, it was already complete(not shippuden) and in English you can thank shonen jump for that, just to let you know. But still good chapter

I am becoming a huge fan of this story. Thanks for update!

This is one of the better Naruto/Hinata fics on the site. While some of the dialogue does come across as kind of wooden, it dosent happen to often, and overall, the plot is very enjoyable. 8.5/10

Even though I'm rereading it for at least the second time, I still can't help almost crying happily.
And I'm a MAN! :D

i love ur twist on things so refreshing

Excellent story my good author! I loved the fluff, and the ending was well timed, some authors end too quickly because they get bored, and others stretch the story too much, because of good reviews, but this was perfect, my hat goes off to you, as this story has topped the THOUSANDS of other fan fictions I have read, and become my #1 absolute favorite story on fanfiction!

At chappy 19 and I LOVE the storeyu so far, it's got sooooo much fluff (that's a good thing) and it has enough fighting to be exciting, but not too much to distract from the fluff! You my good friend are a superb writer, it could almost be called art-
BOOM
" Fools, I will show you art" - Deidera
" Shut up teme, I'm trying to read this boss story" - Me

Anyways, thanks trophy four this great story!

I will no reread it, I think. The quality of writing is about average, with a certain need to get you spelling in check (you seem to have a dislike of than/then and fondness for dieing instead of dying).

The pacing was... meh. Not overly great, with lengths part time through, but not overly so. The romance was overly happy-go-lucky and wish fulfilment it was close to mush. And the awful gratuitous Japanese! Argh! Seriously, using words you don't know the correct meaning of or the appropriate placement... it was jarring. Especially in light of more than fitting English counterparts being available! Even more so because of those you'd (probably) know the correct use of, instead of using the same Japanese word for multiple meanings...

So no, it wasn't a good story. Decent, but not good. I was wondering how the blind Hinata would play out and more disappointed than not.

Hello. I just found your fan fiction today. I really like it. But, I was just wondering on why you used some of the wording you did. What I mean is in this sentence : "Otou-san. Nee-sama." Why is Hanabi given a higher honorific than her father? And why is Hinata calling her older sister? Or maybe I missed something. Sorry for bombarding you with so many questions.