Reviews for Blind: Extended Edition
mbshadow chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
good start i just hope that title blind doesn't mean you going to have hinata's eyes cut out or sum thing because that's just wrong.
Liquidus Snake chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Friggin' wow. I honestly wish I had half of the writing talent that you do. You're already making my fic look like something worth only as toilet paper...*Weeps to self* Anyways, I approve, and wish that you continue.
OldHwonDos chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
That's actually pretty nice. I don't know if you know but the names of Naruto's parents has been revealed. His da is the fourth, Namikaze Minato. His mom is Uzumaki Kushina. Apparently he looks like his dad but acts like his mom. Anyway, I liked your other stories and hope to be just as entertained by this one. Take care.
Vld chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Not to mention, if Naruto was to die BEFORE he absorbed all of Kyuubi's chakra, it is my belief that the Fox would be released as well.
griffin blackwood chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
nice it looks like ppl might actually understand naruto's situation now lol
Velshard chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Well I definitely like your first chapter and I definitely want to see how your story progresses, though I am a little sad already if the conclusions I've drawn from your story title and summary are correct then Hinata is going to be blind unless of course your going to throw one hell of a loop like Kishimoto-sama has been lately. To be honest though the idea of Hinata being blind(that is if I'm right) is probably rather heart breaking for some Hinata lovers(me included because she's really such a sweetheartT-T[crying]) but what I think will keep people reading is if you keep up the quality of work you've showed in this chapter alone because it really was very good. I just hope a little bit that if this fate does befall Hinata that sometime in her future somehow her eyesight will be returned to her unless of that would ruin the story then I wouldn't because what I care about is it being a good story.

Signed The God Of Perverts
Han-Ko chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Good history
Kyubbi-Sama chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
GREAT!

Update soon!
Frohtastic chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
interesting concept..

but you could have written " he is to be named uzumaki after his mother " bla bla bla ,, since thats what his mom's last name is ( chap 367 in the manga )
Dustin Ambrollo chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
Pretty cool man cant wait till the rest of the chapter!
Boby09 chapter 1 . 9/9/2007
i think it's great so far can't wait to see more! _
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