Reviews for Blind: Extended Edition |
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![]() ![]() loved the story, it was well written. Thanks for posting this _ |
![]() ![]() Omgg i think im gonna be sick...it was bad enough with all the vomiting and bodies and creepy stuff...but now they all have Hinata's eyes!? That's alot to process since im already half asleep. but it's going good I LOVE THIS STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! I'm glad I decided to read this fic over again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FYI: Crying is still possible with ppl without eyes. The lacrimal gland is not always associated with the whole eye. Stress and strong feelings build up chemicals in the blood like magnesium, and the lacrimal glands respond to this by releasing these chemicals and salts into tears that are used both to relieve irritation in the eye and relieve stress. Notice how people feel better after a good cry, it's the relase of all the built up toxins and stress hormones. So yeah, it was fine to make Hinata cry in the last chapter. It was biologically possible. However, having them run down her cheeks may or may not have been very possible, as they might have just slipped into her empty sockets... |
![]() ![]() lol. in your face orochimaru. |
![]() ![]() i wonder why naruto didn't make his shadow clone during the enemy attack at the hyuuga compound..? hmm.. |
![]() ![]() yeah! that's the kind of story that i like to read. kisame and itachi dead right of the bat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man oh Man i never get tired of this story. I don't even know how many times i've read this story but it is by far my favorite NarutoXHinata story ever. Fantastic story a gripping tale of love, the trials and tribulations of life, the acceptance of being something more than what you are, and the understanding to put yourself on the line to save others. That and the endings/epilogue is one of the best i've read. Only thing missing is some upbeat emotional song playing in the background. |
![]() ![]() ![]() my god you started out good then it all went to shit you made naruto way to over powering it not even funny. its stuff like this that kills a story completely you made the story different and i was like hey not to bad but then you started making everyone to bad ass and now the story's dead sorry but ima stop reading here cause iv read to many story's like this to know how its gana end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, the end was so sugary, I almost got diabetes from it, but you know what ? I don't mind it at all. It was perfect that way. Hell, it even made me shed some manly tears. lol I'm putting this on my fav. list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() not sure if this is a Naruto mistake or an author mistake, but... by definition if he's in a rage, he cannot be killing in cold blood. arguably if he's in any way not in complete control of his actions, it's not in cold blood. cold blood would be to do so without emotion. to not care at all. it's worse because the person doing it is in complete control of their actions. it's debatable if this is even Possible when he's under the influence of the Kyuubi. the opposite being, as one example among several possibilities 'in the heat of battle'. the idiom is based on the 'emotion heat' metaphor. yeah, things like that bug me more than they should. |
![]() ![]() Really, if people couldn't guess the cargo, they don't deserve to be fans. Come on, its just experiments, I believe? |
![]() ![]() this is greart wwooww blew my mind |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well done. I truly enjoyed reading this from beginning to end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ho my gawd. BEST CHAPTER YET! It was really funny. I cracked up at the parts with Shika and Gaara-kun, and I would would have literally been rolling on the floor if I had been able to stop reading. I love how everybody keeps mistaking Naruto as Minato, and how Naruto suddenly has his own fan-club. Hinata finally has her eyes back! Yay! This was awesome! Good going! |