No offense, but are these Nadesico people soldiers or soap opera stars? I know that they're probably just like that in the anime so you had to make them like that, and I'm not saying you're a bad writer, I'm just kinda voicing my annoyance with them. I think about half their dialogue is what the military calls "insubordination". Again, not trying to offend, just fuming here, but there was an insane amount of instances when half the characters would've been fired then and there. Gah, now I remember why I gave up on anime. By the way, in the chapter with the chaos sorcerer, it's extremely unlikely that any chaso marine would have "yoshi" in their name. On a side note, Bloodthirsters don't savor the kill, they want the blood to flow as soon as possible. Also, Khorne hates magic, so that sorcerer shouldn't even be there. Cheers.

I like the story, will there be more? :)

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hey realy like your fic hope you up date and a ? is akitos boady the bad guy

Please write ideas get a bit confused with who is who but nadesico is like that to know how this ends

Very good, will they ever meet the imperium of man?

Thq did make dawn of war but it did not make warhammer 40k. But anyways a good story plz update

I am not familiar with this Nadesico (though I tend to avoid anime)This strikes me as something that has potiental though do not use japanese words and actions so much if they arrive in the forty first mellnium those gags wont Ciaphis Cain has the right to be funny in the 40k in a question the Chaos cults springing up why only Khorne when theres one the other three are sure to be messing around Tzeentch,Slaanesh and Nurgle are usally cuasing luck you'll need it.

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