Reviews for A Very Good Occlumens
Bastet Goddess chapter 4 . 1/18
Damn, Severus! Lol I WANT MORE!
Ladii Emelia chapter 4 . 8/24/2012
I enjoyed this.
Claire chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
I was wondering if you could e-mail me the MA section, I'm gonna b 18 in 2 weeks but I'd rather not wait cz I'm already so into it, plz plz plz. My email adress is
Sarah Crawford chapter 4 . 7/25/2011
This story is marked as complete, but it seems very much incomplete. I’m not willing to join another fan fiction site (adult fan fiction dot net) just to read the rest. Do you ever intend to post the conclusion here? As for the story itself, you have an interesting take on what could have happened. I’m not wild about your characterizations, but I am curious to read your ending.
ShadowedPlague chapter 3 . 7/23/2011
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH I LOVE IT!
ShadowedPlague chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH! YOU'RE AMAZING!
ShadowedPlague chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
THIS IS BLOODY AMAZING!
riverlover chapter 4 . 6/17/2011
I liked your story and wished that you would continue it but I guess since you labeled it as "complete" you don't plan on returning to it. Thanks for sharing the story.
frozenfiery chapter 4 . 1/7/2011
hmm... wished you could continue this story... like so that harry grows up w/ lily and his step-dad sev. that would be interesting of how sev is in the parenting role w/ lily's help. to see them start a family together. maybe w/ a sibiling for harry and like sev showing lily, harry and harry's half-sibilings his love? ;] that would be cool

hope you'll think about it! :D
brokencryingangel chapter 4 . 4/26/2008
LOVE IT! Would be super cute if he got her pregnant, i love it do more soon!
Z-L.B chapter 4 . 4/11/2008
I decided to do as you asked and check out your other fics, Interesting. I'll admit I would have liked to see a little farther in the time line. But it was the setting a the beginning of what can be a great story. If you ever decide to do a sequel. ~ZLB
syfm7 chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
gah i was gonna right a "what if james only died" story...but i guess you beat me to the idea :(..Fantastic work!
Alex the Anachronistic chapter 4 . 11/11/2007
Aw. I like this story, it makes me all teary-eyed. Very IC. Good work, mate. Write more.
Antidaeophobia chapter 3 . 11/8/2007
This is a good idea for a story, although I'd have to say, your moving things a bit fast, even if it is to protect Lily.
Purple Artichokes from Mars chapter 3 . 11/4/2007
Ch4 should pass muster now. FFN can be rather catholic in what they consider "MA" (PS: You are aware your story is rated "T", right? You might want to up it to MA, just in case...) It really was better with the extra stuff in it, but as long as the policy is as it stands, it'll have to do.

Once again, very enjoyable chapter and story. I really like how you write Snape.

- P.A.M.
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