Reviews for The Ends of the Earth: Ancksunamun Part One
nia chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
i loved it !

i want to keep reading !

im addicted !

your amazing as a writer ..
WQ chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Aw! Poor Ancksunamun! I love how you state her thoughts and feelings in great depth. Can you write what happens next/
xLilly White chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
God, this story's just a WOW. I'm totally in love with the way you write Anck's POV; its so different from the few other stories that talk bout her life in the palace, twisted and haunting (you're probably tired of hearing that *.*) Just loved it. I've never read a fic where Nefertiri and Anck are actually mates, and the way you wrote them in that little scene up on the balcony was just perfect.

Great writings! *goes off to read the rest of the series*

winternight x
Ruse chapter 1 . 3/6/2003
Very nice! Excellent work, such passion and fear. Poor Anck. No, in fact, it is not because she's only been with Seti that she thinks Imhotep is beautiful. It's because, by god, it couldn't be more true! ;) I really like this and look forward to continuing this tomorrow night when I'm not falling out of my chair in tiredness. :)

Anyway, again I say excellent job. Great characterizations and a really realistic look into her mind. :)
Tolkien Freak chapter 1 . 3/5/2003
Dude, impressive.
Lula1 chapter 1 . 10/25/2002
I must say, I stumbled across this story from long ago...and I'm glad that I did!

I can only think of one word to describe this story...'magnificent!'...

I never have been a big fan of Anck...but the way you have written this...and how you didn't portray her character as deceitful and power hungry...was refreshing...and put her in a very different perspective for me. I like this Anck...her helpless situation...and how Seti is manipulative and demanding...which I have always perceived him to be...

You are an incredible writer! I will be reading the rest of the series of stories connected to this one...and I will venture onto anything else you have written...(sorry...lol...I have only been a member/author since June 2002[I believe], and will catch up on the rest of the stories as soon as possible...

Your diction is very descriptive and eloquent. I love the manner in which you write. Thanks for a refreshing view on Anck's inescapable situation. It puts her in a better light and makes the whole situation of Seti's death, and why Imhotep and Anck chose to do what they did, quite understandable.

Lula
sarah chapter 1 . 1/12/2002
that was really goood!

please write about the fight between anck-sun-nman andneferterri
Mommints chapter 1 . 1/11/2002
Good lord, what a hauntingly beautiful story...and I say shukran for giving me the opportunity to see Anck and Nefertiri in a different perspective. I don't know about anyone else but when I watch their fight scene in TMR, it's taken on a whole new meaning now. ;-)
Lady Mercury chapter 1 . 1/10/2002
Oh!

That was great..I feel so sad for Anck Su Namun and Imohotep..
Kate chapter 1 . 10/11/2001
I'm...well, I am having trouble talking! I am in complete awe of how beautifully, how perfect you've written this story. It's absolutely splendid! I wish I had the gift for writing as you do..

And, I love how you sort of switch the supposed story from Seti being such a good man, to being a colder, possessive type. Then it switches Imhotep and Anck into the better side..anyways, before I start giving out my whole opinion...

I really liked it. No, wait...

I loved it.
Lilia chapter 1 . 10/4/2001
This story rocks! i also liked how you made ancksunamun and nefertiri friends. (cuz me and my friend are going to be them for halloween)
Peacockgirl chapter 1 . 8/30/2001
I really liked this, it is so good. I like how you made Nefertiri and Ancksumanmon friends at the beginnning and explained how they sort of became enemies.
Usako3000 chapter 1 . 8/28/2001
Brilliant. I like the friendship between Anck-su-numun and Nefertiri, it's nice! :)

Too bad it was destroyed.
Fortune Cookie chapter 1 . 8/25/2001
Very sad! Extremely serious and dark. However I really like this. I like the way that you show Nefertiri and Anck to be friends before Seti wantes to marry Anck. I always thought they had been friends at one time. Very well done!
Lady S chapter 1 . 8/24/2001
Ooh! Very interesting. A rare POV, not many take it from A's side, usually I's. Nicely done.
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