|Reviews for A Personal Matter|
| noradin chapter 22 . 10/9
The mortality rate of your jounin seems bit high. Together with what you wrote about the exam the jounin force of Konoha would be depleted in just a decade at best.
| hello chapter 12 . 6/16
70% of rainforest roughly is in and around the tropics bar the amazon in the temperate so fire country (hi no kuni) could be like big landmass like europe and eurasia only at the equator and it is spread out with konohagakure is in big rainforest like south american villages.
| AuxLexikon chapter 26 . 4/7
My goodness, this was a delight to read! The characters feel like they developed into what they should be (stupid decisions included), the imagery is vivid and detailed and shows the reader in such a way to let them gather impressions instead of being told what the impressions should be. There were a few typos, but the beauty of this story has already swept them from my mind.
This is one of those rare fics that I want to make into a little book so I can reread where ever I want. Thank you for making such a marvelous story and sharing it with us!
(I appreciate your subtle humor; your disclaimers never failed to make me laugh!)
| MattKennedy chapter 26 . 2/5
Good story. A little overly angsty at times, but I really like the premise. :)
| brnkofeternity06 chapter 25 . 2/1
I honestly expected to review more for your story. I enjoyed reading it even though I had hoped that Kakashi would take some initiative with Harry, since they're brothers after all. I waited, waited, and waited for a scene of some sort. I almost stopped reading and gave up on your story twice. I'm happy that you didn't kill off Tenzou but am sad about Kushina and Minato... and then Naruto. Will read the sequel though :)
| jupimako chapter 25 . 12/18/2014
Fantastic story! I can't wait to read the sequel. So excuse me while I go do that now.
| inheritedjeans chapter 25 . 12/1/2014
Wow! This crossover of yours is amazing! Really well written, and you've kept everyone in character, which isn't easy when writing crossovers. Or when writing young-Kakashi. Even more impressive is your writing of Harry - he is absolutely convincing as a child. I don't often read children written the way they actually act, which is with the selfish, kind-hearted mind of the innocent tangled up with the gravitas of a full-grown adult at times. AND you also wrote him learning a new language, with lexical gap frustrations done very well. I'm so so happy I read this! Thanks for writing it, it was a great read.
| Noxy the Proxy chapter 14 . 9/15/2014
| LoganAlexander chapter 13 . 5/25/2014
i stopped reading at the point he just started running away...i need to stop you real quick and call you an idiot...do you really think the naruto world is going to call someone a monster for doing something incredible...oh wow wtf were you smoking...first of all he is not a demon container...secondly he doesnt look freakish like kisame or zetsu...the first thing people are going to come up with is kekkai genkai...SMH...also is kushina a shinobi or what...she was running around with an idiot ball the whole time...
| khguyt chapter 26 . 3/1/2014
great story, thank you
| BlazeStryker chapter 9 . 2/12/2014
The Prophecy for HP says the one with the power to defeat the Dark Lord is born *to* those who defied Voldemort three times. Not *of* them..
| BlazeStryker chapter 4 . 2/12/2014
It has to do with experience., summoning. long-term partners learn to recognize the chakra of their summoner so that blood isn't required for the connection to home in on. Pakkun is Kakashi's most frequent partner.
| Sorasdream chapter 26 . 1/27/2014
Wow...looks like naruto may not be in the best environment. Hopefully Harry and Kakashi can work out some trusted childcare or something for him.
This story was great read!
| Sorasdream chapter 10 . 1/27/2014
Wow...so Kakashi and Harry kind of seem to be getting along...perhaps? Kakashi seems to be holding a lot in, obviously it isn't healthy...I just hope he doesn't end up bursting that emotional dam when he's on a mission it could see him killed.
I feel really bad for Harry, he doesn't understand the language at all, I mean would it have been impossible for the Hokage to spend like an half hour with him every other day? Just so Harry could ask a few questions? Isn't there anyone else in the entire village that knows english? I almost wish there was some sort of workbook that brought for Harry from england that would help explain things, but if Dumbles brought Harry then that old coot would probably wouldn't have thought of anything.
Anyhow this was a great chapter!
| Sorasdream chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
So, Kakashi is a big brother. Looks like he may be warming up to Harry. I wonder is Harry going to get training once he figures out the language?