This is so well written and has such a wealth of character development and ANGST. The way Harry and Kakashi's respond to their respective trauma is raw and engaging, and the awkward sibling relationship is just-*chef's kiss*-magnifique! The flashback where Harry encounters fiendfyre was especially well done (I LOVE the way the fire seems almost sentient!) and the way the poor kid is forced to navigate life without knowing the language is so accurate it hurts. Seeing him realize what was going on at Obito's funeral was so sad it HURT and then the kyuubi happened and-ughhhh! Baby Naruto is way too fecking cute to be alone with that mean lady!

loved this story. heading over to the sequel now.

seriously, I like this story but the author must me retarded. Rin literally asks if there is some way they can explain the situation to Harry and Minato just says they have to wait and have him figure it out?! it's causing problems! all they need to do is have the Hokage explain the situation to him. Jesus fucking christ.

wtf is wrong with your version of the third Hokage. he KNOWS Harry doesn't speak their language and doesn't explain anything to him. as far as we know he's the only one who can and he just gives him the most minimum amount of info. does Harry even know Kakashi it's his brother at this point?

What will happen next time

Ok, Rin and Obito were the ones who were actually rude in this chapter. Rin asking Kakashi with what's wrong with him just for asking why Harry is crying bothered me. I love Obito, but the way he's angry at Kakashi for being...actually that's just Obito nevermind. But seriously though, I'm with Kakshi on this one, they're favoring Harry too much. Kakashi is just a hurt angsty boy, who got bombed with info that he has a brother and he has to share. SHARE WITH A COMPLETE STRANGER just because they're HALF BROTHERS. If one of my parents cheated and suddenly produced me a sibling unannounced, I would fucking rage. Hell nah, am I gonna share. Fuck that. I'd feel betrayed yo. Add the fact that they all side with the new sibling since they're so pitiful and shit. Motherfucker now I feel salty...

Thank you for coming to my TedTalk. Author this is good. Your making me feel feelings. I approve. Very awesome.
But please don't make me die due to blood pressure.

Ty ;w;

Eles não perceberam que a criança não sabe falar a língua deles? sempre soube que os adultos (em HP e Naruto) era irresponsáveis, mas isso é o cúmulo do absurdo! Eu estava achando que o Harry era filho do Kakashi ahahahhaha ainda bem que é irmão, senão Lily ia ser uma pedófila.

Confesso que Rin e Obito me irritaram um pouco, mas, tranquilo, estou acostumada com o comportamento hediondo de Uzumaki Naruto

Me encanta!

But... but... everybody's got a water buffalo!

I couldn't stop reading. That's how good it was

unabhängig das letzte cp. ist das eine fantastische geschichte und ich liebe sie. hoffe harry geht es im weiteren verlauf gut, er bekomm bald sein chakra in den griff ud kann sich ewas mehr um naruto kümmern. lg hayne

Reading this strangely made my really frustrated, but i guess it was written fairly well

I can see why Kakashi finds Obito annoying, he is really intrusive

Very interesting story so far. Going to start on the sequal soon. The renditions you have done for the characters have definitely been different. Curious on what other changes you will make since you made Kushina not a jinjuuriki and no masked Obito.