Reviews for A Personal Matter
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 15 . 7/15/2013
I am unsure whether I hate you or love you. This chapter was amazing as usual, but the cliffhanger! Suspense!
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 14 . 7/14/2013
Oh the cliffhangers! This was a good chapter, we get to see Harry's speech development and especially the drastic difference between his previous and current life. Gai's personality was spot on too.
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 13 . 7/14/2013
It's hard to believe that Harry has only been in Konoha for a few months. So much has happened! Though, you kind of ruined how Harry disappeared in the final note of your A/N T-T This adds so much more tension and promise in this story- the fact that you're incorporating some magic in this. I love the way Harry acts because of his abusive family at the Dursleys. I also really like Minato's rumor discharging ability, but right now, I'm just excited to finally get to the wizarding side and find out if they find out that Harry is a Hatake.
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 12 . 7/14/2013
The suspense and tension of the back story of their parents is killing me! I can't wait until the revelation of their story to the two children. While I wait for that, I can appreciate and reflect sadly on Harry's inability to comprehend the harsh reality of shinobi life and how everything will become clear when he joins the academy. I am super excited for a great deal of things in this story. Still loving it even though I get slightly impatient of the language barrier. Sometimes I with the Sandaime would explain everything, just like Dumbledore did in Harry Potter. Can't wait to read the next chapter! (but since it's already out, I don't have to, yay)
Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 11 . 7/14/2013
I read the first 10 chapters without internet today so I couldn't review. This is the first crossover story I have ever read and I absolutely love it. Everyone is so in character and a lot of the little things that each of them do just adds to it. I love the way that the characters are developing. They are changing a little different from the canon timeline, which is absolutely normal, but the way you've written their development is fantastic. They way they're acting as the story progresses, though not canon, is perfectly and logically in character. Richly imagined. Very interesting. The exams were great too!
Crazed King chapter 10 . 5/24/2013
I like lots!
Silvanon of the Orchard chapter 26 . 5/2/2013
I really enjoyed this story! Now off to find the sequel!
Berret Kitty chapter 26 . 4/28/2013
Good story! I really enjoyed reading this although it took a while to get used to such a ... cold... Kakashi. But reading his point of view gradually helped in understanding why he acts the way he does.
Bubblekins1010 chapter 26 . 4/20/2013
*ABout to fall out of chair laughing...THUD!* Oh, that wasn't me, that was my little sister, sorry! But bringing Minato back as a Hogywartsy ghost would be cool!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 25 . 4/20/2013
Heh heh heh! Kakashi, and Harry are FINALLY getting along like brothers now! YAY!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 24 . 4/20/2013
And so Minato, Kushina, and Obito, are dead...Poor Poor Harry.
Bubblekins1010 chapter 23 . 4/20/2013
The single word I can say that I'm thinking /right/ now is...IDIOTS!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 22 . 4/18/2013
Heh heh heh! Rin was right he was going to have an ANBU squad out for them! Ha ha ha!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 21 . 4/18/2013
Oooooppss...Harrys...Doomed...
Bubblekins1010 chapter 20 . 4/18/2013
You...Wow...Harry you ROCK! Now he just needs to do better in the writen stuff and he's set!
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