Reviews for Upon the Pebbled Shore
blindrain chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
;-(

Sad stories are the best, sometimes. I like the way you wrote the story - continuity. :)

The end was really nice.

Good job.
Nelarun chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
This was really sad, I think this horrible tragic opera I have playing in the background made it even more tragic. Very bitter sweet. Well done!

Nela
SkyChild chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Awh, no... the poor twins! And for immortals, there can't even be a happily-ever-after beyond death. Will they meet again beyond the sea, one day? Wouldn't that be an idea for a sequel?
ellfine chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
very beautiful and very sad...
ShimmeringWater chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
The perfect parting.
AC2 chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Oh, this is sad! Not a bad effort at all, but you have some typos you need to sort out. Please let me know when you have done so, and I will add it to my C2. There are links to helpful forums on my profile where you can get a beta to check for errors in your stories.

Look forward to seeing more of yor work.