Reviews for The Return of Naruto
nine-orcids chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
i love it!
Anon chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Not bad overall I suppose. The only real problem is that it reads kind of awkward, almost like English isn't your first language and you haven't quite reached 'bilingual. Not that it's bad...it's difficult to describe. Almost like it's too...proper. Not quite colloquial might be a better word for it.