Reviews for Element of Surprise
maedeh chapter 27 . 4/29
it was nice thanks for it
Valenti1965 chapter 27 . 9/16/2014
Totally adored this story so much. Thank you!
Breanna3593 chapter 19 . 7/3/2014
What is this!? Why did I choose to take a peek at the next chapter? Big mistake on my part. This just solidifies what I said in my last comment.
Breanna3593 chapter 18 . 7/3/2014
I just had to stop here. I don't really like this at all. Harry's kids are out of control at just 11 years old. I know Harry didn't raise them like that- just horrible.
Breanna3593 chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
How does Harry have a one year old child or Severus' kin when he hadn't seen him in 12 years?
victoria chapter 27 . 1/8/2014
I think this is the best snape potter mpreg I've read please continue to make amazing fanfics.
Guest chapter 27 . 11/16/2013
This was so bad I had to keep reading it hoping it got better. Sadly it did not
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 27 . 9/11/2013
tobias? you do know that severus hated his father right?
kathyjo chapter 11 . 10/8/2012
"They are my children, I deserve to see them. I deserve to know them!"-This I agree with

"You don't deserve anything! You didn't love him and pushed him away, you lost all rights to those children!"-This I do not agree with..you can not love the person you inpregnate but still love this child created.. I will say this again Harry had not right to not let him know about his kids
kathyjo chapter 8 . 10/8/2012
Very disturbed here..ONe he had no right not to inform him of the 2 boys and second her sure did not have ANY right to use his blood for another child...this always bothers me in fics like this just because of a fight or a person being a jerk does not mean they should be cut out of thier kids lives or not told of them at all
DarkGirl27966 chapter 27 . 7/25/2012
I really liked this. There was some angest but it ended happy.
Guest chapter 26 . 5/16/2012
Torri his first kids James and Sirius so that was his first pregnancy. Aylena is his second and he is currently pregnant a third time. Understand?
Torri chapter 27 . 5/2/2012
Wouldnt that be Harry's 4th pregnancy? The story said it's his 3rd...
YeCatsJ chapter 27 . 2/21/2012
Very nice story. Great job.
DestinyWitch chapter 27 . 7/26/2011
i love this story and can read it over and over again
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