Reviews for The War Between Heavy and Light
peyote-angels chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
I love this. Ryan is my absolutely favourite and I think you wrote him perfectly. I also love the cat part and the reference to Angela; that was cute.

God, I loved this!
Faile Aybara chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
That was beautifully written and I think you captured Ryan perfectly! I love the part about how he need her sweater to jerk off... so hilarious and yet I could imagine it to be true!
hanakinstarbuck chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I really, really liked this. It was well written, and even though it was mostly just thinking (which can suck the life out of stories if done wrong) it was coupled with actions and worked really well. I love the Kelly/Ryan thing, so seeing Ryan show any sort of emotion toward Kelly is awesome to me. But all in all, good job!
MsOffice chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
This was really really good. Ryan angst! Now this is how I really want Ryan to feel.

Great job!