Reviews for Face Down
irislim chapter 25 . 1/29
I’d read this story before and added it to my favorites. Now, a year later, I read it again for a bedtime read but had forgotten it has a sad ending! Now I can’t sleep because I’m so sad :( Brace yourselves for a sad ending, guys; but I must say the writing, especially for the latter chapters, is exquisite.
Guest chapter 26 . 10/14/2019
Omg this stomped all over my heart. Darcy was a bit (a lot rly) of a dick and a player but I love him anyway. Thanks so much for writing this!
NotACursedChild chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
Ohmigoodness I finally found it! One of the first fanfictions I ever read, and I had absolutely loved it! Though the ending had made me cry, and I do not cry easily! It has been at least three years since I read it, and I still remember it all clearly! (-:(-:(-:(-:
Guest chapter 22 . 8/11/2019
Your characterization of both Will and Lizzy are terribly shallow. The only character I liked was Fitzie.
GreenEyes-BlueCoke chapter 26 . 3/11/2019
That made me cry. Sometimes I like reading angst fiction, though it makes me really sad. It was so beautifully written. You're pretty awesome. I totally agree that life can't always have cutesy endings. The ending was very touching and I loved it
CheshireLion chapter 25 . 12/30/2018
This was so hilariously bad. Thank you for the entertainment.
Ale chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
Me gusto mucho la historia y el cambio en la trama del final.
someone chapter 26 . 6/5/2018
what is wrong with you
ohmygod i cried so many times while reading this, its so well written, and the fEELS oh my god tHE FEELS
i should be studying for my p.e. final exam but here i am :)
Haley van Straten chapter 26 . 5/24/2018
GIRL! This is really unfair. You Were NOT supposed to do that. Your story was going super great but you had to drop that bomb on me. I'm literally crying right now. And that is saying something, cause I'm not an emotional person. I didn't even want to finish the chapter. I can't believe this. Why would you make him suffer like this? I can't she's dead.
Hina Hime Chan chapter 1 . 2/19/2018
Perfect story. Really loved it.
Guest chapter 26 . 2/11/2018
Ohgod how could u do this to me?

Good Job
Guest chapter 26 . 12/7/2017
As an author, your goal is to make your reader feel any emotion. Anyone can shit on your ending but I can honestly appreciate it since it was able to convey and portray the intended emotion. It was sad and heavy on the heart but I applaud you for being capable of doing that.
irislim chapter 26 . 9/29/2017
My heart is so heavy after reading this! I love that Will and Lizzy's story panned out over two stages of their lives. It was very realistic for them to reconnect as adults. While I can somewhat forgive you for at least giving them one night together, I cannot bear that ending! Do I have permission to write an alternate last chapter? Please, please? I hope your other stories ended more happily than this one!
lali jishkariani chapter 26 . 9/6/2017
a bit silly ending and not tragic for me,becouse it was so silly and so rash that for me tragism was completly lost...and exagarated turtor for readers,becouse you know we are reading this kind of ff for one and only reason becouse we love that couple,and you made it turtor for us to read last ten chapters and the ending was complate rush...at least you should make up for that turtorous journey we were in half of this storythe only thing i liked here was there love story back in scool...but anyway thank you
Edwards passion chapter 14 . 8/26/2017
What a wonderful chapter for several reasons:
1. The real rendition of how guys mess with other each other to win a game of pool;
Two. The gossipy a small village aspects of high school;
Three. Competitive teenagers. I love the fact that Will shot Lizzie and didn't spare her ;
Four. Characters who Able to reassess their opinions of each other.
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