Hey... I can't remember if I've reviewed this story yet, but I've read it a couple of times and I'm enjoying it yet again. :). I just wanted to say this is one of the best "Autobots-meet-general population" moments ever. So cute! Thank you.

Better'n' just good.

I liked Sarah-as-an-army-person. It made her seem less of a helpless woman, and more of someone who could take care of herself. Great idea!

Nice charectarization. How old was Timothy supposed to be? Because at points it seemed like he was a grown man, but at the end he seemed like a boy.

Ha ha! Was this after the battle in Egypt? I think it probably is. Poor Ratchet, your work is never done.

Nice seems to inadequate a word, but it's all I have at the moment. Have you/would you consider writing more into Jolt or the femmes? I liked your interpretation of them, as a separate alien species, distinct from the Cybertronians, it was nice.

*snickers* Nice!

I knew it was Starscream!

Great job! I liked it. It was so in-character. Keep writing!

Nice. Really, really nice. I really am speechless at how awesome that was, it was like... perfect.

Ha ha! Nice job infusing laughter into what would shortly be a sad, sad scene. *thumbs up!*

I like what you did with Optimus, with the he's-the-religious-leader thing. Have you written more along that line, and if so, what are the names of the stories? And if not, you really should consider doing so. I also loved his speech, it really sounded like Optimus.

Somehow, Sam does seem like the kind of boy who would play World of Warcraft...

Amazing. Made me think and it humanized them (no pun intended). So , if I read that correctly, was that them going back to protofrom, or do all Cybertronians have 3 forms, bipedal, alt, and that one?

Good job. That's a very Lennox thing to do, break the rules, but have a damn good reason for doing so.