Reviews for Glances Into a Spark
Alathea2 chapter 30 . 1/31/2013
Hey... I can't remember if I've reviewed this story yet, but I've read it a couple of times and I'm enjoying it yet again. :). I just wanted to say this is one of the best "Autobots-meet-general population" moments ever. So cute! Thank you.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 31 . 7/29/2011
Better'n' just good.
Unesheet chapter 31 . 7/18/2011
I liked Sarah-as-an-army-person. It made her seem less of a helpless woman, and more of someone who could take care of herself. Great idea!
Unesheet chapter 30 . 7/18/2011
Nice charectarization. How old was Timothy supposed to be? Because at points it seemed like he was a grown man, but at the end he seemed like a boy.
Unesheet chapter 29 . 7/18/2011
Ha ha! Was this after the battle in Egypt? I think it probably is. Poor Ratchet, your work is never done.
Unesheet chapter 28 . 7/18/2011
Nice seems to inadequate a word, but it's all I have at the moment. Have you/would you consider writing more into Jolt or the femmes? I liked your interpretation of them, as a separate alien species, distinct from the Cybertronians, it was nice.
Unesheet chapter 27 . 7/17/2011
*snickers* Nice!
Unesheet chapter 26 . 7/17/2011
I knew it was Starscream!
Unesheet chapter 25 . 7/17/2011
Great job! I liked it. It was so in-character. Keep writing!
Unesheet chapter 24 . 7/17/2011
Nice. Really, really nice. I really am speechless at how awesome that was, it was like... perfect.
Unesheet chapter 23 . 7/17/2011
Ha ha! Nice job infusing laughter into what would shortly be a sad, sad scene. *thumbs up!*
Unesheet chapter 22 . 7/17/2011
I like what you did with Optimus, with the he's-the-religious-leader thing. Have you written more along that line, and if so, what are the names of the stories? And if not, you really should consider doing so. I also loved his speech, it really sounded like Optimus.
Unesheet chapter 21 . 7/17/2011
Somehow, Sam does seem like the kind of boy who would play World of Warcraft...
Unesheet chapter 20 . 7/17/2011
Amazing. Made me think and it humanized them (no pun intended). So , if I read that correctly, was that them going back to protofrom, or do all Cybertronians have 3 forms, bipedal, alt, and that one?
Unesheet chapter 19 . 7/17/2011
Good job. That's a very Lennox thing to do, break the rules, but have a damn good reason for doing so.
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