Reviews for Glances Into a Spark
Unesheet chapter 18 . 7/17/2011
Very good, reminds me of Exodus: The Official History of the War for Cybertron, but belivable, because the book is too... disjointed. I really like what you've done, and all in all, it's a very realistic look at what could've happened.
Unesheet chapter 17 . 7/17/2011
I totally agree, Ratchet is a great medic, and needs a plausible reason to not be able to fix something. I liked the "if you put the parts back soon enough, your body accepts them as reinstalled" thing. Very nice idea.
Unesheet chapter 15 . 7/17/2011
I see a lot of Jazz-as-a-Decepticon stories, and this is a pretty good one. Nice job.
Unesheet chapter 14 . 7/17/2011
Ahhhh, Bumblebee, you're right. You really don't want to know.
Unesheet chapter 12 . 7/17/2011
Great job with Jazz, he needs more love. And it's very plausible that he would react that way to our music/languages. Please write more Jazz, you do it so well!
Unesheet chapter 11 . 7/17/2011
Ahh, poor Simmons. Nobody really likes him because they think he's just a jerk, but I think I would act/react the same way if my entire life's work (considering he really had no other job option) was contradicted by a seventeen-year-old ( he was seventeen, right?) and his Camaro. Nice job making Simmons something other than an over-caffeinated hyped-up typical power-abusing government agent. Would you consider/have you written Tom Banachek? I think you would do him great, too.
Unesheet chapter 10 . 7/17/2011
Nice job. I didn't really like how in the movies, Sam never joins the military (which would make sense), instead he just kinda takes jobs that take him away from the Autobots, so good job on this.
Unesheet chapter 9 . 7/17/2011
All-Knowing Google. I just about died at that line.
Unesheet chapter 7 . 7/17/2011
I love that origin for Ratchet! What was his first name, or did you not want it known?
Unesheet chapter 6 . 7/17/2011
Nice in-sight to what was happening when they were driving to Missioon City. But if Ultra Magnus had come, it would be like Jazz: Here, take the Matrix. Ultra Magus: *covers face* I can't deal with that right now!
Unesheet chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
Awwww... I love Miles/X-Box bot stories. Somehow, they fit each other like Sam and 'Bee.
Unesheet chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
Ha ha! Speed Racer!
Unesheet chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
Finally, someone (a character) recognizes how utterly ridiculus it sounds. Who were the Autobots?
Unesheet chapter 2 . 7/16/2011
Ha ha! Totally Ironhide!
Do a Barrel Roll chapter 31 . 7/8/2011
This one was probably my favorite so far!
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