Reviews for Profitable Silence
MyShadowsThorn chapter 4 . 9/17/2007
only one person reviewing...that's no good. This story is better than that. Especially now since in chap 4 Karen and Popuri are getting tricky in their schemes and Won might finally want to talk to Luna and act like she is his wife and not another customer...

Anyways...great story! It's getting good..can't wait for next chap
kisa-chan-2006 chapter 4 . 9/16/2007
End? No, this must not be the end! I state so, in a a sudden fit of rather childish tantrums...

Ahem...

Anyway, this chapter, Cliff returns, with his new girlfriend Aja...

What could be worse than that?

Popri's secret crush on Zack...that's a doozy, just as unique and odd as Elli and Gotz!

Anyway, Won actually comes over and doesn't try to sell apples to his own wife...

This is going to be somthing ineresting...

I can't wait until the next chapter!

kisa-chan-2006
kisa-chan-2006 chapter 3 . 9/15/2007
Ha!

That made me laugh.

Zack...in love with her...and she's going to actually give him a chance? Hahah...sorry...it's just so...weird...

Actually, scratch that, everyone deserves a chance...but...somehow I can't really imagine that couple...but..anything could happen!

Then it turns ot to be Won...

Then she acts all surprised...but, it's good to let go and try something else too. You can't hold on to the same thing forever...though Zack seems to be doing a good job of that...

Keep on writing these chapters, the plot is starting to thicken...

(Just like my beef soup...)

Sorry, it's late where I live and I'm being a bit random.

I can't wait until the next chapter!

kisa-chan-2006
kisa-chan-2006 chapter 2 . 9/15/2007
He just wanted to make a sale, she wanted to pretend that he was actually there to comfort her...

That's some mixed up stuff, but pretty realistic...

Crying on the docks...

That's something I can imagine her doing. This was a well writtn chapter and I expect you to continue! (I like it alot!)

kisa-chan-2006
kisa-chan-2006 chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
It sounds to me like it is in-between a one-sided romance, and a pity marriage...

Or maybe, later on, Won will find the gull to actually love someone more than himself...if that ever shall happen.

Or...maybe they just have a quiet marriage and don't prefer to speak their feelings out loud, but prefer show them in mere actions...

That's an interesting aproach..

Anyway, this was good, I enjoyed it!

kisa-chan-2006
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