|Reviews for The Broken Stallion|
| kellym01 chapter 21 . 2/28
Oh come on you can't just leave it there, plz continue
| DragonGod926 chapter 4 . 7/12/2013
Genma isn't the evil bastard you make him out to be. He's just a greedy, misogynistic glutton of a fool.
| Master Dakari-Venomon chapter 21 . 5/16/2013
Great story so far! Dont give up
| Fenarinarsas chapter 21 . 3/3/2013
Delightful sad story best enjoyed until the end of the gymnastics fight arc. I found it entertaining and was pleasantly surpriced by some of the plot twists.
Since it seems the story is dead I will use my imagination and give the story a good stopping point soon after the gymnastics fight, with Ranma being taken away (probably ordered) by one of the girls, both never to be seen again.
After that point further chapters were interesting but the story began to branch away too far from the main point, Ranmas suffering and introduced elements that began to make the story too complicated. Thus perhaps the cause the story died.
I am glad I ran accross this story and spent the time to read it. I will be happy to read the first half of this story again sometime in the future.
Thank you so much for all the time and effort you spend into the creation of this wonderful tale.
| nushadir chapter 21 . 10/13/2012
Hell, it's one of the best fics i've ever read. And i've read a lot. I know that a lot of time had gone due latest update or reviews - but THIS story asks for next chapters. One thing i can't understand - why at 11 chapter Ranma while fall in a koi pond didn't switch a curse. All other things are pretty logical and clear. Are you planned to place a Kunos siblings as a major antagonists, or it's while Kiima's arriving? My thoughts - Kunos, as Tatewaki, as Kodachi, are not evil, and aren't antagonize Ranma&Co. They're slightly (second thought - no so slightly) deranged and can be provided with neccessary distractions. Saffron? May be - but I doubt have not a clue that there is a Ranma and others. So it's Saffron or OOC personage.
Sorry for my crappy language.
| Aki chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
HURRR AKANE SMASH
hah. hahaha. Really?
You think telling me I'm wrong and that Akane could really act this way when all the evidence in the manga demonstrably points the other way is going to change my mind? Listen dipshit, I didn't drop this fic because it's dark, I dropped it because it's stupid. It pitted Kasumi against Akane, a newbie and someone who has been practicing since she was in grade school, and flat out told me (in a way that leads me to believe the author is going to straight up bash Akane into the dirt instead of having her school Kasumi badly) that this freshy could get better than her in 2 weeks, someone who roof hops and mashes people through concrete mind you, and will be training constantly.
That's why I dropped it. The story seemed like it might be compelling before it hit this retarded moment, even if it did turn one of the most altruistic individuals in the whole series into a 1 dimensional mallet swinging maniac, But within it's own universe it lacks the consistency I expect from even grade school level writing. I've already given the author free reign and if he can't make sense with his own damn heavily altered characters then I'm not going to waste my time slugging through someone hamhandedly trying to punish someone who can hop 2 stories straight up by matching her against a newbie who probably never lifts anything heavier than a sack of groceries.
I would have trouble believing this even if you gave Kasumi 2 years instead of weeks.
| Bit chapter 21 . 12/13/2011
First please come back and continue this series. Yes it may be dark, yes it has shown cruelty but over all this is easily one of the best fics I have found. Side note to Aki, Viewing the characterization he put into the Tendo sisters it is easy to see Akane acting this way especially when comparing her to the manga and anime. End of rant. Thank you again GrizzlyBiscuit for this fic and by all means please continue it.
| aki chapter 9 . 9/22/2011
I'm about done with this, this is pure Akane bashing, only an anti akane fan club would be dumb enough to think that a girl that could level a brick wall with only her fist could seriously be put under by fucking kasumi with less than a months practice. You've gone far beyond the AU premise of Akane being fairly insane and traumatized. You've proven yourself to be about as mentally stable as a kuno as well in deluding yourself about all this.
| ImayHaveaName chapter 21 . 7/10/2011
*sigh* Yet another reread, we miss you Grizzly :/
| Michael The-Zorch Haney chapter 21 . 6/18/2011
So far its a really good story. I like what you've done with Ranma, he acts like someone does who's been subjected to a great deal of physical and emotional abuse for a long time. The idea of Kasumi and Nabiki both going after him is also pretty well done.
Hope you plan on continuing this sometimes soon.
| Trugeta chapter 21 . 8/5/2010
I agree with your analysis of KI and how it is used. It also seems that Happosai's continued presence is having positive effects.
I wonder what will come off Nodoka's and Genma's spat. Will it changed something, anything in Genma for the better? Or will the opposite happen?
Funny how Ranma shut up Kodachi. And it's only classic what happened afterwards with the bomb.
Good chapter. Hope to see more.
| Trugeta chapter 20 . 8/5/2010
That flashback was... intense. I can only assume the Neko-ken cut lose so as to allow Ranma to survive.
It also seems that Happosai's presence is having a positive effect. Neat. Now to see how things develop...
| Trugeta chapter 19 . 8/5/2010
Seems like forever since I last stopped by. RL issues can be a b*****.
Anyway, a lot going on in the chapter, and Happosai's introduction should steer things up. More to Ranma's past revealed, and as expected almost none of it good.
| gypsyhuntress chapter 2 . 1/22/2010
"Ok, I'm doing something wrong here. I started off with a dark entrance, showed the hero getting the life beat out of him without even the briefest of defenses, only dodging and whatnot. Even the tried and true head smashing of one schtick mallet. What does it take to get flamed around here?
Disclaimer: To Takahashi Rumiko-sama we pray for forgiveness. Amen."
in my humble opinion, the problem was that you started off by -asking- for flames. that tends to get flamers out of the mood. quite well written, unfortunately realistic behaviour, but that was your point, wasn't it? i particularly like your characterisation of Kasumi.
| gaul1 chapter 21 . 12/12/2009
good chapter, get the feeling akane will try and wake them up, keep up the good work, very good characterizations, and splendid job on the imagery