Reviews for Wonderland
AnonymousPerson chapter 2 . 5/5
Oh my Kami THANK YOU! Someone who finally understands me. Mary Sues are the epitome of my anger. And author inserts, especially when they ship themselves with other characters it just like NO! You can crush on a character but not that much. If I were you I would’ve bashed them but then again, I wouldn’t be a good writer. Anyway love ur stories!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/30/2017
Sasusakulover4ever chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
I made it to chapter 3 then I couldn't handle this shit anymore like what the fuck this sucked
ZiKiKaCrEePs chapter 12 . 11/29/2015
I looked it up! Its called autonomatronics or animatronics. I'm 11 so ya I didn't know what you spoke about. But I do now!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
I agree on your rant n i like this story by the way sasuino sasuhina sasuten SUCKS n let me point out some things as well-While in the chunin exam in the Death forest or whateva i dont remember the name,when sasuke regains conciusness after receiving the cursed seal he saw sakura beaten up by the Sound nins n he was like'SAKURA,who did this to u?'see,he was enraged n he was only calmed refrained from killing that bastard who dare lay his filthy hands on sakura when she hug him and asked him to stop AND sasuke n SAKURA not ino or hinata or tenten but SAKURA get married and have a cute daughter named Sarada in the end of the series so Aha!In ya face non-sasusaku for my long rant but i cant bear any non-sasusaku fic especially if its with karin really how can they like her n besides she would be six feet under had it not been for sakura because sasuke tried to KILL her(AHA HA hA HA! Laughing maniacally)n i forget to point out there is one affectionate gesture between 'em,the scene where sasuke poke sakura on the forehead the affectionate gesture between itachi and sasuke.(Aww! HOW CUTE)AND BY THE WAY I LOve it keep ug the good work(goes off killing non-sasusaku fans with a scythe while saying'I am thy Grim Reaper and I have come thee because you are non-sasusaku fans')
luvsasusaku.97 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
LOve it! LOve it! LOVE IT!
GIMME DAT CANDY chapter 2 . 4/7/2015
I totally agree. I mean, if I was in the naruverse I'm pretty sure I'd be a secret fangirl, but my OC was made not to fit him, so if I ever imagine them together, my OC's long purple hair and attitude just simply doesn't fit sasucakes. XD
it doesnt matter chapter 14 . 6/30/2014
What happened at the end? What was the end meaning..
it doesn't matt chapter 8 . 6/30/2014
Super cute try adding more passion and details in your story's ...
dont you think i chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
Don't you think it would be cute if sasuke and Itachi fought over sakura I mean think about it if Itachi loved sakura and sasuke loved sakura and they fought over her it would make a great story.. plus he wants to kill his brother and regain his clan. And Itachi would be perfect for it and Itachi is his brother and sakura should BE and WILL be sasukes beloved. I mean you get the idea right? :)
swasome unicorns chapter 9 . 10/20/2013
Phew! I thought I was the only one who wasn't really into yaoi, yuri, KakaSaku, and SasuNaru. I'm glad that you think that those are a little iffy too, and I wanted to tell you that I'm really liking your story so far! And the rants too, lmao xD
Fuckin'Dango chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Im so with u on the sasusaku stuff. Other sasu pairs suck. I hate them. Ugh, im a sasusaku fan addict 4ever.
Awesome101 chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I support you! I agree that Sakua and Sasuke should only be paired with each other and NOT other nonsense pairings! SasuSaku FOREVER!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
Well I think mary sues are good only if that the structure writing and grammer was ok. As long as there is a mary sue but it is written well I like it. Not like"aruka walked to the ninja school. She had a feeling a nice dolphin would fall in love with her. Iruka looked out a winddow and saw this really hot girl and stuff so they asked to do a lunch date. And good news! Her test was positive!" Yeah that bad in the first sentence - fail
8melody23 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Heh I enjoy your rants Cx. Love your stories! (:
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