|Reviews for New Life!|
| Golden Silver Kelina chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
This is going to be great i bet ur going to throw a humculi into this situation
| Anti-Disney chapter 3 . 1/12/2012
really good, keep it up
| the god of the new world chapter 3 . 3/4/2010
XD its so awesome please continue
| melodybutterfly chapter 3 . 8/2/2009
interesting story please continue
| Kestre Wynde chapter 3 . 8/1/2008
This is . . . kinda weird. But still interesting. Doesn't Tomoe DIE though? Also, anata doesn't actually mean 'darling'. It's a polite form of 'you'
| Misty Narumi chapter 3 . 3/20/2008
this is funny and cute at the same time...and also weird...lol
| W. Jester chapter 2 . 12/21/2007
Great story please continue, the only thing I found confusing was that Chouno appeared seemingly out of nowhere, but I loved that you kept faithful to his attitude, keep it up!
| SwordOfLightBladeOfDarkness chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
this is great! please update!
| mangafreak7793 chapter 3 . 9/13/2007
| mangafreak7793 chapter 2 . 9/12/2007
this is funny yet crazy at the same time keep it up
| Michiru's Mirror chapter 2 . 9/11/2007
This is a cute idea and a good start. Everyone's in character and the image of Mahiro whacking Kazuki over the head is really funny. I can't wait to see what Chouno does to...well, make things worse, probably.
A few suggestions:
1) Your Japanese. "Anata" is ONLY female-to-male, and it's also only wife to husband.
2) Descriptive language. Try describing things a little more. What was Kazuki's room like? How about the clothes Kazuki and Tokiko were wearing? It'll help spread the story out.
I look forward to more.