Reviews for Invisible |
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![]() ![]() ![]() when it said he stood by his wife I thought for a minute that it was Minerva you was saying was bumbles wife hehehehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() What did the Potter ancestors say to Lily? |
![]() ![]() So what in the actual hell kind of reaction is that? After resolving not to give them a penny, he gives them a lot of money and property after his deadbeat, abusive mother attempts to torture him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to Reece, anyway? . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story so much wish there was more would love to see if harry gets any other masters what is wizarding world like ect Does lilly ever get her magic back does she move and fall iin love |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought Severus and Harry got an Order of Merlin 3rd class for Eileen's potion? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I got blood poisoning once it sucks so much Took me a month to get better |
![]() ![]() At burkeleah1992 RE: The Contact We hate this lying conniving fool who calls herself debstheslythrinsnapefan - amongst her other 1150 IPs or VPNs accounts names and multitude of emails addresses - for trying to highjack fanfiction . nets reviews system to claim "most reviewed work on the website title". Insane and unrealistic as that may seem. Only about 2000 or so are actual reviews from real people who aren't her or attached to her. Most of those haven't actually read this "story" and only review to join it's faked bandwagon. I know more batshit fanworks manure, drama and attention seekers and seeking most of them. She's been planning this for almost twenty years - going by oldest IP address - and yes us hackers can easily bypass all the limited securities to view all data's. So 2004 is where "her", them or it's scheme to deceive appears to start. We'd guess the mentally warped and deficient was a teen then being born - or being created as a failed laboratory experiment - between 1988 and 1992. We - and yes there is a group of us on various media platforms - would never deem to be so low as to ever read this pile of domestic garbage that's been left to rot in the sun. The fake reviews - especially those sickeningly vain self congratulating ones - are a better read that this tripe. My immortal is better coz at least it is funny in parts. Two other fics played that same fame game of fake accounts to hugely boost review numbers. Only Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality has actually anywhere near the amounts of real reviews from genuine FF accounts. This really hasn't changed in ten years. Then 'De Contact(ions) an gains 50K reviews in less than 14 months? Yeah right. Even Putin couldn't make that work! We even suspect that you burkeleah1992 to be another alt fake as your bio is blank, but your IP and location seems fine, so your probably not another of that demented debstheslythrinsnapefan's alter egos. So unless 'she' has gotten very clear, we'll take you as being the real deal. For now anyways. Because for evil psychos on the net and websites to triumph, all good sane fandom people need to do is not attack them at every corner, ridicule their petty self glorification, irritate them by calling them out and finally bring enough notice to this scam that fanfiction . net staff actually finally notice and delete this sad excuse for a fanwork. The constant plagiarism of older works - either 'her' own works or others sad tales of crap - should be grounds for deletion as it is. Find us ridiculing this on twitter, Reddit, Tumblr, TikTok and depths of fiction alley private forums. TL,DR: This is a fake mostly plagiarised story with more than 94% fake or false reviews. Don't be naïve and fall for this lying tragic bitches bullshits! 0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let me preface this by saying that this story is definitely worth reading and has quite a happy ending with several wizarding world problems resolved. My main nitpicks are some logic problems (ex. in a certain hospital scene, it was mentioned that it was only the second time that Harry met Ollivander when in fact, he'd meet him two other times earlier during the wand weighing for the Triwizard tourny and to replace his wand after) and how forced the harry-neglect felt with the rest of the Potters. Lily has an "excuse" with her mental condition. The others, especially James, really didn't. Going from loving your twins to neglecting one of them, with no direct outside influence, is very weird. As mentioned however, the story and the journey was quite enjoyable. Thanks for this story, author! |
![]() ![]() I think this story is alredy pretty good, just 2 or 3 spelling mistakes |
![]() ![]() Interesting but a very logical choice for Eileen to 'suggest' researching hermaphroditic creatures. If the invertebrate research doesn't pan out, perhaps vertebrate species known to exhibit parthenogenesis? Logically, it should be easier to transmit the ability from one vertebrate creature to another, rather than invertebrate to vertebrate. It might affect the potion so that the resulting fetus is genetically only the 'mothers', but hey, it's magic. Who knows? Maybe it would work! |
![]() ![]() why didn't he get the wand with the core thats the same as voldemorts? |
![]() ![]() oh hey u idiot s[op posting fucking shit and calling them harry potter stories |
![]() ![]() Oi boa noite,sua fanfiction foi uma das melhores que já li só acho que apesar de tudo o James potter no fim ajudando ele a voltar no tempo talvez o harry poderia da uma chance pelo menos dele conhecer os netos mas mesmo assim amei toda a história muito obrigada pela oportunidade um grande abraço e muito felicidades. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that this might be the very first step to a potential friendship, at the very least, for Harry and Sirius, especially as Harry has admitted that he has not removed Sirius as his godfather. Baby steps... |