damn this is nearly a decade old. its september 2024... in a few months it will be 2025. that authors note at the start shocked me! anyways. ignore me! just rereading this work of art yet again for like the 4th time

It's been ages since I read this... it's so weird... You're not showing Dumbledore as manipulative and/or bashing him... I can't remember if it comes later, but so far he's alright... In a Deb story... I'm all confused... ;) It's lovely to listen to this during work. It's a good story and so nice and long! :D

good story

Please update this story is so good and want to see the kids growing up

this is so sad

This try at an accent is atrocious, not very readable. Could probably have the same effect if you changed one or two letters and not butcher the word completely. Good try though.

as usual, great story.

I’m confused why Harry is taking Defence at Hogwarts when Severus is teaching him.

I’m confused why Divination is on Harry’s OWL results when he never took the class. He should’ve only had 10

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Jeez Dumbledore, just ask to view Lily's memory in a pensieve for goodness sake.

why does he still floo when he can apperate and has the license to so legally

But thanks for the story. It was an amazing story, I liked it!
I read the chapter 112, but I already posted one review

I would like to see if Lily Evans regret very much what she did to Harry

when it said he stood by his wife I thought for a minute that it was Minerva you was saying was bumbles wife hehehehehe