Reviews for Invisible
Idc chapter 1 . 9/18
Hmm is this finished or does it have more updates to go i wonder
Guest chapter 112 . 9/15
LOVED this story. Ive been reading fan fictions for more than 2 years and this is one of the only ones Ive finished. Such a beautiful story, now Im going to start reading your other ones too, can't wait!
Guest chapter 112 . 9/11
I've read I think maybe 6 or so of your stories so far and I would have to say to this point I would have to say this one has been my favorite. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Scaranpannoir chapter 112 . 8/31
There's, like, an eff ton of children at the end omg XD I find that amusing, actually *grin grin
Scaranpannoir chapter 97 . 8/30
perpetrations for dinner lol, ihni what that means tho XD
Scaranpannoir chapter 89 . 8/30
Keep relaxed and open, allow me to enter.
Sounds so oddly... umm...
Scaranpannoir chapter 87 . 8/29
Didn't Harry see Ollivander again, though? Back after the whole Voldie resurrection thing?
nightpurr chapter 88 . 8/26
I cried so much the first time I read this. I wouldn't even continue reading it for a little while. Sev is my favorite! !
Now even though I know what's coming it didn't stop me from crying again. Thank goodness I was at least prepare this time.
Great story.
Your biggest fan. ...
nightpurr chapter 83 . 8/26
I have read this b4 but just wanted to let you know how much I have been enjoying it.
I like how they found the cup. That was a different way of findings it. I didn't remember that from the first time I read this chapter. Maybe it's one of those changes you made or I forgot about due to a side effect of reading way pass sleepy.
Your biggest fan. Nightpurr
Zarroc789 chapter 81 . 8/21
Didnt black send a killing curse back at someone will that be mentioned again. Seems important
Yakharelli chapter 35 . 8/20
Y tenía que ir Sevi a poner orden...
Yakharelli chapter 30 . 8/20
Me encanta :3 ah pobre Eleen, tienen que lograr una poción que la sane u.u
ThunderSphinx chapter 112 . 8/5
Poor Lily :(((((
Luthien Surion-my elvish name chapter 47 . 8/2
Ok so first off I want to say I love love love your writing, and this story. Your plotting and tension building is great, I'm captivated by where you're going to take it next. Your pacing is pretty spot on - it's not dragging, and it doesn't feel like you're skipping ahead. It's wonderful! Characterisation - fantastic! Your characters feel pretty darn realistic for their AU. Their choices don't feel off. I'm really enjoying this.

But, I just have to ask you. Why do you spoil your own writing? Why are you spoiling your own fic? Your author's notes are *full* of very blatant spoilers for pretty major plot points! I could understand it if you were putting in content warnings, but they're not. And, sadly, when you spoil your own plot, it rally kills all that wonderful tension that you just spent 5 chapters building up.

I'm honestly curious here. Why do you put spoilers in your author's notes? They're not skippable, it's really hard to ignore the chunk of bold text right above the 'next chapter' button, and the big spoilers tend to either be the very first or very last line of your notes - aka the lines most likely to be read.
Kitza-nya chapter 10 . 7/31
So here is interesting fact. Bulgaria is one of the most southern countries in the EU. It is next to Greece and Turkey. It's funny that all authors write like it's on the wild north or something. God, they haven't real winter indeed.
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