Reviews for Twilight
ever-lethargic chapter 5 . 5/31/2014
Absolutely fucking loved it! The plot was amazing and I loved all of the intense scenes between Roxas and Axel.
StarDream22 chapter 5 . 1/19/2012
Ssoooooooo good gah I really hope u consider updating this it is shamazinnn! I luv it 3
Tears Parallel chapter 5 . 5/28/2011
I really like your take on what-if-Roxas-went-with-Axel. Never mind the fact that it may have screwed the world over since Sora is still sleeping. (But hey, they can awaken him even if some people still don't remember him, right? ... -crings- Poor Sora.) It's something that I can really imagine happening rather than the ones I usually see with Roxas acting completely out of character even with his memories erased.

I loved how you included Demyx. AND ZEXION! ...As a heartless. Demyx always managed to make me laugh with how he acts all cool ... and then runs away as soon as there's a possible fight. Pfft.

I wonder what would happen if Merlin and the crew saw Roxas and what they would think.

Is there going to be a point where Roxas remembers completely? (What about if he became as powerful as he did in the Final Mix battle between Sora and Roxas? Of course, you don't have to include that at all ... My personal belief is that he gained those awesome beams of life after rejoining with Sora and realizing that becoming Whole didn't mean that he'd really be complete ... if you understand what I mean.)
LyokofiedPhantom chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
really liked that... It would be great if you continued
blaahblaah chapter 5 . 6/9/2010
i really enjoyed reading what you have so far. this is such a good story and i can't wait for your next update!

[sorry i'm so bad at reviewing. i really liked it though and i am very excited to see what happens next]
Kiryn chapter 5 . 3/16/2010
Continue please! I want to know what happens next!
Pandawasmyballpen chapter 5 . 8/5/2009
please! I just love your story so much! just please...update and continue this story!
animearlinefreak chapter 5 . 6/12/2009
Wow I love how well your description for this story is and also how identical you matched up the story to the real plot line of Kingdom Hearts. I love how this story gives us the readers the chance to see what might've happened if Axel took Roxas with him. I'm glad that Demyx is on their side, Demyx rocks! I can't wait to see the next chapter of this story and I hope you keep up the good work!
Dreadalus chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Your writing style is absolutely breathe-taking. It's very refreshing from the rather bland styles of other writer's on this site. And your idea is one I've often wondered about. What would happen if Roxas left with Axel? All in all, awesome.
appendingdoom chapter 5 . 4/30/2009
Wow. I quite like this story a lot. I do really like pretty much all of it. The Demyx and Zexion!Heartless are cute additions, but I really like the moments when Roxas and Axel are trying to relate to each other.

I think the whole thing is quite well-done, even your combat. And of course, I'm still tremendously confused about what exactly is happening, but I suppose those things come later.

Also, I do like the exploration of the fact that the Heartless and Nobodies don't get along, and in fact have differing goals / agendas.

Anyway, glad to see such a high-quality piece of work. Can't wait to see more.
cheesynoodle chapter 5 . 2/24/2009
I loved everything about it–this is a really, really, interesting spin.

Twilight Town and Roxas was always of interest to me, but the short amount of time you actually got to play as Roxy was always so unsatisfying. I really like the added in bits–it fleshes out the plot and Roxas' character. I'm a little bit confused at the restoration thing though–I never really understood it. If Roxas' was learning more and more as he meets people, wouldn't the restoration decrease, or at least slow? I'm not calling you out on it, but rather the game. I haven't finished playing Chain of Memories though, either, so maybe the whole memory switcheroo thing is described in more detail there. Eh, whatever.

Really like where this is going and excited to see what happens next, though.
dragonlover131313 chapter 5 . 2/14/2009
Wow, I gotta say when i first started to read this fic i was really confused about what was real and what wasn't and what Roxas remembered and what he didnt.

But soon i got to be on a roll and I gotta say i am really enjoying this plot twist that you did to the original canon.

I can only hope you will keep writing this and if you do please let Roxas remember soon i feel so bad for him being in the dark like he is.

Again Great fic, enjoying it so far immensely!
Zume Rokkata chapter 5 . 1/20/2009
I'm really enjoying this so far, the Axel/Demyx dynamic is certainly strange. And the Bookmaster thing is cute. I keep thinking of Zexion squashed into the shape of a little heartless. It makes me go squee.
AlexaK18 chapter 5 . 1/1/2009
I really liked this chapter. I really like the way you wrote Demyx and the heartless, and it's really cool that you put them in Traverse town. Good job, and I can't wait to read more!
momo chapter 5 . 12/24/2008
I-I don't even know what to say. Your story has got me on the edge of my seat. It's ... amazing. I'm interested where you're taking the story and the outcome of Axel rescuing Roxas and all that.

I'm looking forward to the future chapters,

Good luck!
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