Reviews for First Kiss
Scathach Warrior chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
ending is weird with the stranger but,it was still good.
Smiley756 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
I didn't think it was bad, good actually.

dare121 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
I think it's a sweet little thing! really liked it...
Turn.Me.On chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Very cute story. I wish it was more than a one shot. :)
Inactively Inactive chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Great story! Really cute.
justagayshark chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
How can you think that was bad!

I thought it was amazing, great job with how they were feeling and stuff

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404bardnotfound chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
you did a really good job! very nice imagery and great work on getting your audience to feel what lilly and miley were feeling _ im sure we can all go back to that point in our life and wish for better

hope to see more liley love fanfic from ya!
Stessa chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Oh, I loved this one-shot! Very well done. So cute.
uluvme chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
aww some perv saw their first kiss (with each other), totally ruined the moment. but that was good.
xXxSemiISlovexXx chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
That was good!
03dee chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
nice story, short and sweet. you should do a sequel, though.
shawn-n-belle chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Aw. that was awesome, it was super cute and i even could invision that in my head. I know it was meant to be a oneshot but you should seriously think about contuning it.
Bloody Violet Heart chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
It's so cute! I loved it!

Why don't you continue the story?
tellmeastory17 chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
its cute. i liked it
shila98 chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
It wasn't bad at all! You did a great job creating the sexual tension and the moment of the actual kiss was terrific (and kind of hot!). Good job!
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