|Reviews for Firsts|
| Wicked.Onna chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
never read anything like that touching and sweet, sad and surprising great story
| JG chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
I can't believe this only has four reviews! This was awesome!
| Gwenfrewi72 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Damn that was so good. It was definitely worth a re-read.
| koiia-halo chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Wow... I'm not sure what to say except for that I really liked it.
| emma134 chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
that was awesome i loved it wowow that was really god
| Whyt Wulf chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
I mean, ... well, wow.
This was ... I'm struggling to avoid saying wow again.
River as a slave. For some twisted, dark reason, I find that extremely erotic. Of course, even the baser part of the animal inside me shrinks back at that reaction. However, this was an extremely well written story. I think the tack you took on this was not only unique, but fascinating. I especially enjoyed how you managed to pull Simon in on it, even though it was completely unrelated to the events Joss put forth. Well, no. I especially enjoyed ... umm, other parts. ;)
But again, I say bravo to you. I'm glad I stayed up to read this, instead of going to bed when I planned. My dreams should be interesting tonight!