|Reviews for Keep me in Mind|
| melissaa chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
soz bout the private message tellin you to update.. i know i should have reviewed you instead but it was late and the crappy wireless internet was being really slow and it was seriously annoying so i figured that rather than waiting an extra half an hour i'd just private message you coz i was already on your profile.. so yeah i apologise.. and like i said before awesome story.. :D
Melissa aka the annoying girl that sent ya a private message
| 1477166 chapter 2 . 3/18/2008
| The Drax chapter 2 . 3/12/2008
Interesting... I'm very eager to see where this is headed. Please update soon!
| ray1 chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
I liked this chapter.
| acer-sigma chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
Nice to see an update before the holidays. I must say Adria seems to have bounced back from her earlier doubts concerning the Ori. That should make working with her interesting to say the least. And if that wasn't stressful enough, you bring in the Wraith (which I suspect might make Adria pause with regards to the Ori being all powerful, since she had such problems with one) and another former System Lord.
BTW, nice job with bringing Jonas into the story. Wonder if his and Cassie's returning abilities has anything to do with the Ancients subtly "not" interfering. Also loved how he mentioned Daniel's crush, from the conversations they had.
| HAZMOT chapter 2 . 12/18/2007
I'm glad you updated before the Holidays. Now that we know Ba'al is trying to re establish his rule, I wonder how the Wraith are going to play into this? Especially now that there are two powerful Gou'ald running around the galaxy. Adria certainly does not have enough power to establish any mental link, but she now sees how vulnerable she is, that the Wraith can penetrate hers mind so easily. I hope she sees that the Ori are not all powerful as she thought they were. Daniel must be going crazy about Vala and holding on to hope they won't have to kill her to stop Ba'al, but many Jonas can clue them in, if he's seeing visions. Nice play between Jack and Sam too. :D
| Sabs chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Love the story can't wait to read more. :)
| CharmedAli chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
ooh, good story, love it :)
| thebloodrose chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Nice beginning and love the AU. Never thought of this..
| Jebaraj chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
how sad. poor vala. daniel better start moving!
| Enajnitram chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
hey great start to the story i'll be reading!
| acer-sigma chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
This is an interesting take on the story. I also think Ba'al may have just made a tactical mistake, since he's now gonna have both SG-1 and Adria gunning for him more than ever. Unless of course he just ends up trading Vala's body for one of his clone hosts, but somehow I don't think he will.
Looking forward to seeing where you take this storyline
| HAZMOT chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Oh, that gives me the willies just thinking Vala is a host to Baal. Now this is definitely different. I wonder where she went and how they are going to save Vala? I don't think anyone has done a Baal/Vala host before. So please continue. :D