Reviews for The Rain
loretta537 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
cute
fresh42jazz chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
You wanted to know about small grammatical errors, lol... second sentence "del" (deal) was misspelled.

And I love your new drabble(s)... The Dark makes me want to write a story with a similar prompt, but I know I don't have time for writing at the moment (I barely have time to catch up on chapter updates)... I love the mini-character development in each. And I can completely see Harry's point of view. (RAIN ROCKS!)

:o)

Good job(s)!
Mina Kon chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
SO CUTE! Everyone, lets give harry a hug! "hugs"

Honestly, ow! He looked so cute!

Congrats ma friend xD
JWOHPfan chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Very cute!
Caldonya chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Very Nice and sweet too.
Janelily chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
OH so cute.

Thanks for sharing.
Ladieraie chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
So Sweet. Thanks for that insight. :)
CSMichaelis chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
that was so cute. I love little Harry!
Golden Lass chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
of course its cute
Beth5572 chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri
Avindara Nirvene chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Haha adorable. You need some punctuation here and there (for example, "as it was their son's sixth birthday" and "but he didn't mind, he was fine playing alone.") But I can't deny, it was sweet and sentimental.
mimosa chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
You have driven me to tears. The poor mite.

Well done, you.
lady sakura cosmos chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
good chapter