|Reviews for The Rain|
| loretta537 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
| fresh42jazz chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
You wanted to know about small grammatical errors, lol... second sentence "del" (deal) was misspelled.
And I love your new drabble(s)... The Dark makes me want to write a story with a similar prompt, but I know I don't have time for writing at the moment (I barely have time to catch up on chapter updates)... I love the mini-character development in each. And I can completely see Harry's point of view. (RAIN ROCKS!)
| Mina Kon chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
SO CUTE! Everyone, lets give harry a hug! "hugs"
Honestly, ow! He looked so cute!
Congrats ma friend xD
| JWOHPfan chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
| Caldonya chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Very Nice and sweet too.
| Janelily chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
OH so cute.
Thanks for sharing.
| Ladieraie chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
So Sweet. Thanks for that insight. :)
| CSMichaelis chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
that was so cute. I love little Harry!
| Golden Lass chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
of course its cute
| Beth5572 chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
| Avindara Nirvene chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Haha adorable. You need some punctuation here and there (for example, "as it was their son's sixth birthday" and "but he didn't mind, he was fine playing alone.") But I can't deny, it was sweet and sentimental.
| mimosa chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
You have driven me to tears. The poor mite.
Well done, you.
| lady sakura cosmos chapter 1 . 9/13/2007