Reviews for Deleted Scenes of Twilight
GothicPheonix chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Sorry, never mind about the chapter 4 review from me. I found the story. It's called Give it to me, chapter ten is the one with Bella's trick; called Dirt backfires.
GothicPheonix chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
Hey I love this story, but I am also trying to find another. you might know it. in one chapter Alice is gossiping and Bella, to teach them a lesson, with Angela's help, uses their vampire hearing against them as she tells Jessica fake 'dirt' on them. Carlisle is there too, and Alice makes Jessica believe it more when she say shouts 'One time' after Bella says she has alligator boots.
GothicPheonix chapter 6 . 2/6/2009
Nice job Esme! Poor Carlisle. I'm recently read a fanfic called I get adopted, and imagine if Edward was real and all the fangirls found out Bella was made up? It'd be hell for Edward. Please continue this series of humor. :)
GothicPheonix chapter 2 . 2/6/2009
MG! This is soo funny. The alliances, betrayal, the arguing, and the sudden win from one who didn't want to play. Then calling Carlisle to referee. Too funny :) Great job! Love it.
reader13lovesbooks chapter 9 . 2/4/2009
LOL! could do a holiday thing...
Guest chapter 9 . 1/25/2009
how bout bella PMSing?
PandylBas chapter 9 . 1/15/2009
i have a few:

-going to the zoo (emmett and bella bonding time)

-amusement park (entire cullen family)

-guitar hero face off (jasper vs. emmett)

-surf lessons (La Push and bella)

-Halloween fun (cullen family)

-sleepover party (cullen family)

-twister (volturi)

-twister(cullen family)

-family album of bella when she was a child

-old family tapes of bella when she was a child

-family album of the cullens during the past decades

-something involving mike newton and bella,another date plot

hm thats all i could think of.
wolfgirl413 chapter 9 . 12/17/2008
Haha, so funny!

I love this story :)

I have an idea...

I think that all the Cullen kids should get grounded, and then gang up on Carlisle and Esme. I know, it's kind of stupid (or a lot stupid) but I think it would be funny.

I hope you update soon!
saziehorselover chapter 8 . 12/14/2008
OMG I LOVE IT! that was great!
geophf chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
Too much.

Much too much.

In other words, perfect.

As Bella's and Emmett's comments continued from merely over-the-top to all-out-outrageous my snickers turned to chuckles turned to gaffaws of laughter (or should I say "gaphfaws"? Sorry, it's a greek thing: I absolutely phreak out when I see the Spanish word for "camera picture").

This chapter is a definite keeper. Thanks for brightening my day!

ASDGJKLJKD chapter 6 . 11/4/2008
HA! i can see Esme doing that! your a good wrighter!
trulydazzled chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
OMC! that was absolutley hilarious! I couldn't review to begin with cause i was rolling on the floor laughing! The hilarious thing is my friend does the exact same thing every time we go shopping- she just doesn't yell! completely Emmett worthy! Brilliant Loved It 100/10
renesmee101 chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
this is really good plz update soon .
Hazelstar chapter 9 . 9/28/2008
Lol, that was funny, if only Esme knew...
Affinitive chapter 9 . 8/3/2008
Gyms are some of the worst places ever! First there are the people hating every moment of exercise, and then BOOM! Endorphins and happiness!

I love how you portray Jasper, such a drama queen XD
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